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xohorsenutxo
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(10/25/03 10:21 am)
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[pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE IT)
SUMMARY: Everyone is busy now. Carole is caught up in her own dreamy riding world while she cant even get Starlight to go over the medium course of fences. Stevie is oh so happy about her practical jokes and cant wait to try one on Veronica. Trouble is, if Stevie doesn't patch up those grades, she wont be able to ride! Lisa is super busy helping the new foal, that her mother is getting anxious. She wants Lisa to knit or do ballet. Plus school, boyfriends, jobs and horses.. how will the Saddle Club ever have time for each other?

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(10/26/03 6:31 pm)
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“Go Carole!” Stevie Lake and Lisa Atwood were shouting as 16 year old, Carole Hanson flew over the high obstacle of fences with her gorgeous bay Thoroughbred , Starlight. Carole grinned at her friends and urged Starlight on.

“And as Carole Hanson aboard Starlight Dream **am making up a show name** shoot for the finish with a time of 89.1 seconds and 0 faults!” The announcer’s loud voice boomed. Carole’s heart started beating quickly. As she soared over the last fence with a large grin upon her face. She had to canter quite a few circles until Starlight finally slowed down to a walk. With one hand, she held the reins while the other gave Starlight’s sweaty neck a big pat.

“And we have a winner ”the announcer declared. Carole jumped off and gave Starlight another big hug. Stevie, her father, Max and Lisa all came over and congratulated her. Oh, I did it! I made it, Carole thought happily. Everyone was patting her on the back. She felt so proud.




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(10/26/03 6:32 pm)
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“Carole! Carole Hanson! Are you up?” a loud familiar voice called, rising up the stairs to Carole’s bed room.

Carole grumbled. “Yes, Dad,” she lied and then strolled out of bed. “I getting dressed!” She called. As she slipped off her pajamas and replaced them with some jodphurs and a t-shirt along with her paddock boots ;she took a glance in the mirror. In its reflection she saw a girl with messy jet black hair which dangled past her shoulders and a tiny little pimple on the end on her nose, instead of a pretty girl dressed in clean jodphurs and a show coat with her hair neatly in a bun.

“Oh dam!” It had only been a dream. Carole moaned again but went downstairs to the kitchen anyways where her father was baking pancakes. Carole’s eyes widened. Ever since her mother had passed away, she and her father had always split the house work. But today Colonel was surprising her. she sunk down into the chair to eat her plateful of delicious pancakes, oozing with syrup. Carole grinned. At least everything isn’t so bad!




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(10/26/03 6:34 pm)
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Meanwhile, Stevie, short for Stephanie Lake was busy getting ready for going to the barn too. She pulled on her faded sweater with the holes in it and her tattered jeans which them too had holes. Infact almost all of Stevie’s clothes had at least one hole!

She leaped out of her room in a good mood, as she passed her twin brother, Alex’s room, she jumped up and down outside the door grinning to herself evilly. Stomp, stomp, bounce, jump, pacing back and forth out of Alex’s bed room. She must of down it at least 15 times before Alex began to holler.

“Stevie. You shut up!” He yelled angrily from his bed. Stevie grinned even wider and began to stomp some more.

“Stevie! Leave your brother alone and come downstairs for breakfast!” Mrs Lake called finally from downstairs. Even though Stevie would of liked to keep annoying him, she skipped downstairs with the smile still on her freckled face.

"Eat your breakfast, Stevie” Mr Lake instructed.

So Stevie grabbed a bowl and some cereal and poured an enormous amount into the bowl so it was practically overflowing! She helped herself to at least 3 spoon fulls of sugar and then gobbled it all down, then hopping out the door.




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(10/26/03 6:36 pm)
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Lisa Atwood was too also on her way to Pine Hollow Stables. She cheerfully whistled to herself as she climbed into her neatly pressed riding pants, tall boots and neat cardigan. Lisa ate her breakfast as quick as she could and took 2 carrots out of the fridge. One for Prancer, the thoroughbred mare she rode and one for Daisy. Daisy was Delilah’s filly. Daisy was only just born. She was helping out to train and feed her.

“Lisa?” Mrs Atwood called.

“Yes Mother?” Lisa asked slipping into her jacket.

“Where are you going, dear?” Mrs Atwood called from, the living room where she was sipping her coffee and reading the news.

Lisa looked puzzled and she poked her head into the living room. “To the barn, Mom…” she said curiously.

“The barn?” Mrs Atwood shrieked. She sighed and shook her head. “Lisa, Lisa. When will you learn that it isn’t all horses and books. You need to start becoming a proper lady. Sewing, knitting, cooking and dancing,” She placed her hands gently on her lap.

Lisa frowned. She did care about what her mother thought of her, and being a young woman. But Daisy needed her. No, actually, Lisa told her self. Daisy doesn’t need me totally. Carole would be helping too. Of course. Carole was the most horse craziest one of them all. She and Stevie ever so loved them too, but Carole loved them the most. Lisa nodded.

Fine,” she replied. “I have some homework to do too” she nodded again and began to make her way out the door.

“Lisa? One last thing, when you get home I expect you to either browse the catalogue for a dance class or help me make pie. Agreed?” Mrs Atwood said, sternly.

“Yes, mother.” Lisa poliety responded. Then she was off.




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(10/26/03 6:38 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
“That was one hard workin’ lesson!” Stevie announced at the end of the class.

“I agree,” Lisa said, loosing Prancer’s girth. “My legs are absolutely killing me!” she gave Prancer a pat and then began to head out.

It had been a hard class. Max had made them all do sitting trot with out stirrups for at least 20 minutes. It had been especially tough for Stevie who had eaten a large helping of cookies just before the lesson that she thought she might be sick. Then Max had made them all take back their stirrups while he set up 4 fences in a row which he explainned were grids. It was to be done at a trot and then at a canter. Max had also had them, to finish off with, walk canter transitions. Walk, canter. Walk, canter.

“How did you find it Carole?” Lisa asked.

Carole didn’t reply, which made Lisa and Stevie exchange worried glances. Carole ignored her friends. The truth was Carole had had a terrible time on Starlight. He kept slowing down and speeding up which made Carole nearly loose her balance and slip off. He made things worse by keeping putting down his head to buck. Then he wouldn’t listen to her aids as she went over the fences.

“Grrr…” she growled. After she had put Starlight away by giving him a quick groom and his hay, Max came up to her.

“Carole? Is something the matter?” he asked, gently putting a hand on her shoulder.

Carole quickly shook her head. No way did she want to be a sore loser.

“You sure?” he asked, staring into her brown eyes with his gentle kind blue ones.

Carole sighed and put a hand to her forhead. “It’s just Starlight never seems to listen to me anymore. He does the exact opposite of what I ask of him,” she said gloomily.

“Hmm….” Max said, in thought. “Maybe you need to practice more with him. Come up tomorrow and give him a little longe lesson. I could help you if you like. I dont have much to do that day anyway”




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(10/26/03 6:41 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
While Carole was talking to Max, Stevie Lake was giving Belle an extra good groom. She had gone well for Stevie, even though Carole’s ride hadn’t been so grand. She gave the mare a pat and told her she was a good girl.

Hurrying, Stevie quickly cleaned her tack. She had a something important she needed to do. Stevie walked down to the locker room and took off her boots and stuffed them into her locker. Then she grabbed her bag. She pulled out some string and some plastic, ugly fake spiders. Grinning to herself, she tiptoed to the other side of the room.

“Phew” she left a sigh of relief. Veronica DiAngelo’s locker wasn’t locked. Stevie planned to get back at Veronica for what she had said about her riding and horse just a week or two ago. Stevie opened the locker and began to work. Once she was finished she stepped back to examine her work, but bumped into a figure.

“Oh my god!” she yelled, spinning around on one heel to find Phil Marsten, her boyfriend smiling down her.

“I guess you forgot I was coming,” he said, grinning showing his white teeth.

Stevie let another sigh of relief and then blushed. “Oops.” she admitted.

Nice Job!” Phil remarked, ignoring totally that she had forgotten, looking past her at Veronica’s new and improved locker.

Stevie smiled back. “Thanks, Phil. I thought it was mighty dandy, myself!” she agreed.

Phil laughed then held out his hand. “Ready to go now?” he asked.

Stevie, with no hesitation took it and began to walk out of the tack room, tugging surprised, Phil along.

“Whoa Girl!” he exclaimed.
Then after waving good bye to Max and giving Belle, a bit of apple, they walked out of the barn. Phil leaned over to kiss Stevie, happily she kissed him back and they made their way to TD’s. A local Ice Cream Parlor.




xohorsenutxo
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(10/27/03 7:58 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
wh00t. thaz the first part up...am still doin the rest of it!;)




xohorsenutxo
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(11/5/03 5:07 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
answer plz...feedback!




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(11/6/03 10:26 am)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
Very good. Have more soon.;)













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xohorsenutxo
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(11/12/03 5:10 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
NEARLY DONE! ill post in a few days:p




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(11/23/03 12:58 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
Lisa in dismay walked over to Daisy’s stall. There was being so distracted with Prancer, helping Red and asking Mrs Reg. about sewing that when she looked at her watch she realized she wasn’t going to have much time with Daisy or her friends. Disappointed, she opened the door to only see Daisy’s head poking out. Carole usually beat her to the stall and Lisa usually expected Carole to be there grooming or feeding Daisy. But she wasn’t. Neither was Stevie. Lisa petted Daisy then backed out of the stall. Red O’Malley was sweeping the hall. “Excuse me, Red, but have you seen Carole or Stevie?” she asked him. Red stopped sweeping and lifted his head. “Uh..I saw Stevie just a few minutes ago. She was with some guy, I’m pretty sure it was Phil. She didn’t say where she was going but she seemed happy,” Red shrugged and continued. “And Carole. Hmm. Carole. No, I’m not sure where she is. I suppose with Starlight or something. She seemed quite upset” Red informed. Lisa muttered a thank you in thought. She knew Carole hadn’t had such a good ride on Starlight, but she dealt with these things well. She was by far a better rider then Lisa was and knew a heck of a lot more. But that did not mean that she couldn’t come help Lisa with Daisy liked they had planned. In fact it had been Carole’s idea! As for Stevie, she couldn’t get angry too much. She was with Phil and Phil lived far away so he and Stevie didn’t get to see each other as much as they would of liked to. (Lisa’s boyfriend Skye Powell-an actor lived far away and if he was coming to see her, she’d accept of course. She just adored him) But still they had said they’d do it. Lisa spun around on her heel and turned to go home.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
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(11/23/03 1:01 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
“Hey this is Stevie Lake is Lisa there?” Stevie asked, a few days later.
The phone went silent and then Lisa’s voice came on as well as Carole.
“Hello Stevie,” Lisa replied, sounding a little tired.
“Hi Stevie, Lisa.” Carole came on.
As always Stevie then blabbed away. “Okay guys, the past few days have been awesome. First of all, I had a super date with Phil. We went to the movies then hung out a bit with A.J Maclean. So anyway I played a totally awesome joke on Chad and Michael (decided to give Alex a break this time). And yeah!” She declared in an excited tone.
Carole nor Lisa answered.
“Hello…guys?” Stevie’s voice asked.
“Well I haven’t been so good,” Carole finally said, flatly.
“How come?” asked Stevie.
“I don’t feel like talking about it,” Carole answered simply.
“Oh okay,” Stevie whispered.
Lisa didn’t say anything.
Carole didn’t want to talk to her BEST friends about her problem.
Lisa sighed, it wasn’t like her. It wasn’t like them. They hadn’t seen each other at least for 5 days.
“Lisa, how have ya been?” asked Stevie.
Lisa gulped.
“Ok...started up dance again and pottery classes. Back to sewing with Ms. Reg!” she replied promptly.
“Look guys, Sorry but I have to go,” Carole finally said.
“Awww..” Stevie gushed, upset.
“Bye Carole! Maybe I’ll see you at school tomorrow,” Lisa added.
Highly unlikey though, Lisa had a big test tomorrow and Carole was in a different grade then she.
“Bye,” Carole said softly into the phone.
“Bye guys,” Stevie finished then hung up the phone. The call hadn’t gone as she’d expected.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

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(11/23/03 1:02 pm)
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It hadn’t quite gone as Lisa had thought it would too. Usually the Saddle Club treasured those 3 way calls as a chance to catch up on news. So far Stevie had been the only one to really say much, and she ALWAYS said a lot. Sure, Lisa had said some things too but she was beginning to feel like they weren’t really seeing each other, trusting one another as much as they used too…


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

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(11/23/03 1:07 pm)
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Finally, another Horse Wise meeting was called. All the members of the saddle club would be there. Plus a few others from their lesson.
Stevie skipped into the barn with a big grin on her face and her hands covered in shaving cream.
What was Stevie doing with shaving cream? Stevie doesn’t shave. Could of she been shaving Phil or her legs? No, not likely.
“Horse Wise come to an order” Max called, slapping his riding crop on a desk.
Everyone quickly found a spot.
Carole sat by herself in the back corner with an anxious look on her face.
Lisa nudged Stevie and they both looked at her.
Carole didn’t look back, she didn’t smile. She just kept her eyes on Max.
Stevie couldn’t help but giggle.
There Carole was acting so prim propt. ((SPELLING))
“Stevie?” Max asked.
Stevie’s face turned pale pink and she looked at him with a tiny grin. “
Yes Max” she said in a wee, innocent voice which made the others laugh.
“Stevie,” he sighed, “Do you ever darn listen to a single dam thing I say? Twice in a row now, girl!”
Stevie gulped. “I’m sorry Max, can you repeat the question for me? Pwease?”
Max cleared his throat, annoyed.
“Stevie, I was telling the class that I have seen something mysterious going around like pratical JOKES,” He emphasised on the word jokes. “And if these keep going on, I will have to tell your parents who might think this has something to do with-“ he started on again when he was interruped.

“Is Stephanie Lake here?” a tall woman with blondeish, brownish hair wearing jeans and a blouse asked.
Stevie gulped.
“Yes she is,” Max responded.
“Stevie? Stevie come here this instance. You’re a disgrace!” she ignored.
“Bye” Carole mumbled and gave her a little wave.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

xohorsenutxo
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(11/23/03 1:09 pm)
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“Oh it was awful! Just awful!” 3 very different girls with one thing in common exclaimed.
They were all coming from different directions and didn’t notice that they were about to walk into each other and crash!
A girl with jet black hair whirled around.
A girl with brown tidy hair spun around
and the last girl with tattered clothes looked around. “
Oh my god” Lisa gasped. “
Guys, listen . There’s something I have been needing to tell you and say,” Carole began after striating out her sweater.
“I think there’s all something we all need to say,” agreed Stevie.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

xohorsenutxo
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(11/23/03 1:13 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
The 3 friends found their favorite Saddle club hangout in the haylofts where they only knew about.
(Carole had been the one to find it)
After siting down in their spots, Carole began.
She explained how she had been having a tough time with Starlight and he wouldn’t obey her over anything. She had been getting stressed out majorly, especially because of the show coming up. The big show.
While she had been talking, Stevie declared she’d found a box half-full of smarties from about 3 years ago and happily ate them, which made Carole and Lisa laugh with disgust. T
hen Lisa explained how she thought the Saddle club wasn’t being a true club by hanging out anymore.
She also got angry when Carole and Stevie had said they’d all help her with Daisy but then never did. (She got over it) Finally Stevie explained how she was caught up in the joke world, she had no time for school work.
Which made Lisa and Carole giggle.
Stevie never had time for homework let alone school work. She was always far to busy.
“I think the answer is simple to our problem,” Carole finally announced, pushing a loose lock of hair from her face.
“Tell Knock- Knock Jokes,” Stevie joked.
“No silly, a Saddle Club trail ride with no problems, boy friends, school or nothing just horses and just us,” Carole told her.
Stevie groaned, a fake groan.
“One joke?” She pleaded as they headed to get their horses ready.
Lisa nodded but soon regretted it.
“Knock- Knock”
“Who’s there”
“Boo”
“Boo who?”
Then in Stevie’s silliest, most dramatic voice she said “Don’t cry now, it’s only a joke”
Lisa and Carole exchanged glances.
“Shut yer big mouth and get ready” they yelled at her.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

xohorsenutxo
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(11/23/03 1:17 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
“Sorry Phil,” Stevie was saying as she checked Belle’s girth. “This is a Saddle club trail ride!” she announced putting her foot in the stirrup.
“But I brought Teddy,” Phil protested.
Teddy was his horse.
“Sorry Phil,”Carole repeated.
“Yeah, you and Skye will just have to hang out at the barn,” Lisa added mounting up.
They giggled.
“Bye now,” Stevie and Lisa and Carole called.
Skye and Phil just stood there with puzzled looks on their faces.
Stevie blew Phil a quick kiss and stuck her tung out, and Skye blew Lisa one.
Together, the girls cantered off for the trail ride.
THEIR trailride, and you know what? Starlight behaved like a dream, Lisa’s mom wasn’t nagging her to do painting and music anymore, as for Stevie, well grades are a WEE patched up, thanks to her friends.
Great friends.


Life your dreams it's not as hard as it may seem



You can do anything you if you try

whether it's jumping

or dressage

All it matters is you put your mind to it

and love your horse
* H
** L
*** U
****
***** R
****** O
******* X
******** !
******* R
****** O
***** C
**** K
*** O
****
** N
* !

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(12/2/03 4:47 pm)
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Re: [pg-13] saddle club fanfic ((other one messed up- IGNORE
hey i like it!:)

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(12/28/03 2:30 pm)
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tres awesome
hey this story is tres awesome :rollin :rollin :rollin

moreee postageee!!!!!!


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