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frostbite423
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(12/21/03 6:09 pm)
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Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Uh oh. :( Why would he want Ally?

Whitebrookroxs90
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(12/21/03 10:09 pm)
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Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)

“Ally you will not go to Brad’s, I promise” Jazz whispered stroking her hair. Pulling back Ally looked into the mans eyes.

“No how about I stay their for a week and then Mist can come here for good” Ally said feeling brave. Then wiping away a tear she smiled. “I mean he cant be that bad after all he is my father” She whispered then hugged Jazz and burst into tears.


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As Ally packed her bags Jared decided to come help. Feeling tears well up in her eyes she ran into his arms.

“Al you don’t have to do this” He whispered stroking her hair. Feeling him pick her up and place her on her bed she opened her eyes.

“I have to, but I cant believe I wont be here when Frosty comes home” She whispered.

“Why do you have to” He asked looking into her eyes and kissing her forehead.

“Because if I don’t Mist can’t come home” Ally cried. Jared was silent very silent. Ally remembered her real fathers happiness when she had told him that she would spend a week with him in return for Mist’s coming to Whitebrook thankfully that was all she had to spend with the snake. A soft knock on the door made them jump and Melanie walked in.

“Al he’s here along with Image, Mist, and Perfection” Melanie said with a little excitement in her voice as she talked. Giving Jared a light kiss on the cheek Ally picked up her bags and left for his car.


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“Ok Ally this is going to be your room” Brad said when they entered a beautifully decorated room. Silently nodded Ally felt her sudden need for Frosty emerge.

“I’m tired so I think I’m going to sleep Mr. Townsend” She said quietly. With that Brad left closing the doors to her room.

Looking around she saw this room was meant for a king not her. Setting down her luggage she walked to the window cell. Slowly rain started to pitta patter against the window, then leaning her head against the glass Ally felt tears form in her eyes and slowly drip down her face.

What had she gotten herself into.

Siggyluver17
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(12/26/03 12:46 pm)
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Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Ooooo me wants mores!

paintchick2002
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(1/16/04 7:57 pm)
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re:ally series#2
cool story i hope you write more soon :)

Make Your Own Coffee
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(1/16/04 9:37 pm)
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Re: re:ally series#2
very good. ew ... i would runaway from Brad's house?! Did we ever figure out how Lav feels??










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Whitebrookroxs90
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(1/17/04 5:40 pm)
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Re: re:ally series#2
sorry for the long wait but here it is!


“Ok Ally, so you have ridden before” Brad asked as he saddled up a beautiful bay. Careful to not let the man see her rolled eyes she turned around and stroked another beautiful bay.

“Yes, I ride Frosty’s Empire” She said looking at the big bay she was about to ride.

“Ok this is Townsend Warrior the colt who is also headed to the big time like your filly” Brad said as he finished tacking him up. Ally’s eyes opened and she almost gasped in amazement. Townsend Warrior was a contender for the Louisiana Derby and had basically dominated his five other races and now Ally could get a chance to feel how Frosty would compare against him. “He is the last colt out of Forbidden Secrets the champion sprinter and out of Amber Grace the Toussad mare” Brad added with a proud yet obnoxious voice.

Trying to smile Ally felt her heart start to hammer as she and Brad walked towards the track. Ally was amazed to see what a big track it was and how many horses where on it maybe around fifteen. Suddenly a medium sized horse galloped by in a zigzag.

“Come on Drew get Highlander in a straight line” Brad yelled as he boosted Ally up in the saddle. Almost flipping onto the other side of Warrior Ally couldn’t help but giggle.

“Now Ally you need to be serious on a thoroughbred” Brad scolded. Ally’s smile left her face and she patted the young horse. “Ok give him a long hard gallop then breeze him six furlongs” Brad said then slapped Warriors but and shooed her off.

“Six Furlongs and a Hard Gallop” She thought as she prepped the big horse. Finally the time came for a hard gallop and Warrior was ready. At her signal the big colt surged into a hard fast gallop and as he rounded the first turn Ally noticed that the horse that was galloping in a zigzag was galloping in a straight line and Warrior had almost caught up with him.

“Easy boy breeze time is coming up shortly but not now,” Ally crooned slightly pulling back on the reins. But the colt did slow down and he still swept past the other horse. Shifting her gaze to Brad she readied herself for the breeze. Brad’s right arm was in the air and his left hand held a stopwatch. Getting prepared for the stallions mind-blowing work Ally crouched foreword and mentally prepared herself.

Time seemed to go into slow mo as Ally awaited Brad’s falling hand. When his hand finally did fall it was in slow motion but Ally and Warrior seemed to go in regular speed.

“Come on boy get moving,” She cried heeling the colt into his next gear. Then like the snap of a finger the regular speed of everything came back. Ally couldn’t help but have a smile on her face because the horse was going so fast. He was like a blur underneath her.

“Come on Warrior lets get that record time I want” She whispered. As they neared the two-furlong mark she felt the colt go into a higher gear but he didn’t stop there because he went into a higher gear. Laughing with joy and hearing the wind whip past her Ally was alive again and she loved the thrill of riding this horse.

His mane stung her face as it whipped against her face rapidly. “Wahoo” She cried pumping the stallions as fast as he could go. Warrior was fast and fast as a horse could be, but Frosty wasn’t a horse she was mystical creature who could outrun any animal on the planet if she wanted. As the long waited finish line came closer Ally started to flick her whip and let Warrior see it. Suddenly the big colt burst into a higher gear and flew past the finish.

“Easy boy, Easy” She crooned pulling Warrior down into slow trot. The colt knew he had down excellent and to show that he had done well he skidded to a stop and whinnied his heart out. A clapping sound made the stallion get moving as looking around Ally saw Brad with a smile on his face and a loud clap and soon other joined along.

Blushing she just smiled and turned her awfully red face away from the other and started giggling inside. Patting the horse and cooling him out Ally felt that all eyes where upon her some smiling and some not. Trotting over to Brad she saw that the man had another horse saddled up. This horse looked fierce and had that look in him like something evil was on him, then without warning the horse reached over and bit Brad pretty hard.

“Stop that you brute” The older man cried slapping the horse firmly on the nose. Then brushing off his sleeve the man turned to her and nodded. “Ok your next ride is this young two year old, his name is Titan’s Armor but his nickname is Titan, he is out of our fastest turf horse ever Thick Armor and his dam is War Goddess the best turf mare we have ever had” Brad bragged.

“Ok” She said jumping off Warrior and handing him to his groom. Studying her next mount Ally could tell this guy was a giant he had great conformation, his coat was beautiful and he had something about him that made him look like a dragon.

“Ok what you will do is ride him along side our exercise pony Tracie for a good mile canter and then you will breeze him along side our other turf two year olds, I don’t expect the brute to win but I do expect him to put in a good performance so I can get him readied for an early race. Also please don’t get scared this horse can sense fear from a mile away,” Brad commanded. Nodding Ally hopped up on the giant and just a quickly as she was on the colt reared in response.

“Hey settle down big giant,” She crooned using her hands to calm him and it worked the young fierce colt came down to the ground then seeing an opening to the track he jumped on and trotted in a small circle snorting and announcing his presence. Maneuvering him to the inner turf course Ally felt all the energy inside him come together.

As she and Tracie’s rider the guy who rode the zigzag horse Drew settled into a canter they looked at one another and smiled. “Ok, Ok he is cute but not as cute as Jared well maybe well sort of ok he is cute” She thought looking away.

“Hi I’m Drew Marlow” The boy said looking at her with a smile.

“I’m Ally Graham” She said back also smiling. The two started into a conversation about horses. She soon found out that he was nineteen and was almost rid of his bug. “Wow that’s awesome, I’m only fifteen well two weeks away from sixteen and I haven’t rode in a race I wish I could” She said in awe.

“Well you are good enough to be one” He said. Blushing she smiled then turned her head. “Hey do you want to go to the country club this Friday it’s kind of like a party” He then said.

“Oh sorry I cant I have a boyfriend” She said in a low voice. All he could say was Oh but then he smiled.

“Hey why don’t you bring him along” Drew said.

“He’s in California with my horse she just got hurt in a race and he’s their while I can’t be their” She said thinking of Jared and Frosty.

“Oh ok well do want a tour” then I can skip the club” He said very quickly. Laughing she smiled at him then looked at he neck of her mount.

“I get it sure” She said reluctantly. Then deciding to call Jared after her riding she vowed to herself that she would tell him the truth. “God what am I getting myself into first Mr. Townsend now Drew Marlow what is going to happen next” She thought wishing she was home or with Jared and in his arms.

SingHokeyPokey 
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(1/17/04 5:48 pm)
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Re: re:ally series#2
good, good! have more soon!:D



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Far beneath the bitter snow
Lies the seed
That with the sun's love, in the spring
Becomes the rose





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paintchick2002
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(1/17/04 6:32 pm)
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re:ally sreies#2
i,m likeing it write more soon

Whitebrookroxs90
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(1/18/04 11:13 am)
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Re: re:ally sreies#2
did you read the first book.. it will help you later in the story;) thanks you guys this is going to be short because i have the third and last book planned out for the Ally Series

Siggyluver17
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(2/10/04 3:30 pm)
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Re: re:ally sreies#2
I like!:) Moree soooooooooooooooooon

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