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Get Your Own Midnight Dream
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(10/29/03 8:23 pm)
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Want a challenge?

Look at the picture and quote below. Look at it well.



She couldn't control her car as her car inched closer to the curve in the road. She regretted partying and drinking for hours, and not allowing someone to drive her home. Now it was too late.


Ok, ready to go?

What will happen is that I'm going to start to write this. Once the 5-minute time limit is up, I will stop and post. If your time limit expires before you finish typing a word or sentence, DO NOT FINISH IT!!! Just let it go, and let the next person finish it.

You decide what will happen in the story. There is NO rating to this story, meaning you can do whatever you want in this. The story can be scary, humorous, dramatic, just whatever you want.

I just ask that if your going to continue, make sure that you include previous paragraphs with your part so it's easier to read. Ok?

Have fun!!!


All insects sing tonight

The coldest sound

I'd send God's grace tonight

Could it be found?


Girl's Not Grey by A.F.I.

Get Your Own Midnight Dream
The Owner
Posts: 231
(10/29/03 9:30 pm)
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Ok... here it goes!!!


"Denise! Wait up!" I turned around to see my boyfriend, Damian, wave at me, motioning over to the bar. We decided to go to a dance club tonight, and party the night away with friends.

Casually walking up to the bar, I looked at Damian. His curly blond hair was all messed up and his blue eyes were sparkling. He looked like he was ready to go back out on the floor.

Ordering myself a margarita, my favorite alcholic drink, I then took a sip, savoring its taste. Damian looked at me and smiled. "Denise, you're so beautiful."

I blushed. I, too, was a blonde with blue eyes. Everything at school was envious of me; I am a cheerleader, plays volleyball and basketball, and is in the drama and art club. I guess you could call me busy... and popular, if you catch my drift.

Damian took my hand and said,


Ok, someone goes now!!! REMEMBER, you have a 5 minute time limit. DO NOT cheat, and STOP when your time limit expires! Have fun!


All insects sing tonight

The coldest sound

I'd send God's grace tonight

Could it be found?


Girl's Not Grey by A.F.I.

Whitebrookroxs90
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(10/29/03 9:38 pm)
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"Will you come home and meet my parents". I looked at him and sighed. Then ran onto the dance floor and ignored him. Grabbing the her hand he stopped me. "Answer the question" He said softly but loud enough for me to hear him.

xzxpixureperfectxzx
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(10/30/03 8:23 pm)
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"damian i dont know" i said with a sigh.

"please baby "he pleaded

I looked at him and bit my lip "Later tommorow or something ok"

" DENISE! now will you come meet them now?!"

" no not now " i snapped feeling angry

" WHY NOT" he hollered

" because" i responded and turned on my heel walking back over to the bar

"fine" he whispered

"denise" he said sighing" i am sorry i hate fighting with you will you come meet them later then"

"sure" i said smiling and planting a kiss on his cheek

He sighed releived and grinned saying " be right back i gotta go use the men's room"
.Just then a guy from the football team came over and asked me to dance with him normaly i would have said no but my favorite song was playing and damien was gone. so i nodded and said "sure"

he practically pulled me out to the dance floor and i giggled he grinned pulling me closer.i yawned and lightly rested my head on his shoulder. He smiled satisfied with himself and pulled me off the dance floor and pushed me against a wall he began to kiss me as Damian came out of the bathroom

Whitebrookroxs90
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(11/10/03 9:08 pm)
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k here my part goes!

Deciding to play helpless i pushed him away an slapped him. "Get off me you freak" She cried.

Running over to Damian i ran into his arms. "Damian" She whispered.

"I can't believe you kissed him" He muttured angrily.

" I didn't he kissed me" She whispered kissing him. Pushing me away he looked at me sadly.

"Are you sure" He asked.

"Yes he may have kissed me but ... he is to big for me to push away" She whined. Giving me a hug Damian walked over to the guy and.....

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