here is the first half of the first chapter lol hope you like i know it may be weird and stuff you know lol also the ages of the horses may be wrong so tell me if they are ...long week lol
so here it is~~!!!!
"Come on Image" Melanie twenty year old whispered as she held on to the mares head. Perfect Image had been bred to Celtic Mist just months before and now she was in labor and it didn't look good, the foal was big and it didn't want to come out. Melanie looked up and saw Jazz, Christina, Mike, Ashleigh, Kevin, Ian and Samantha. Tears started to form in Melanie's eyes as she saw all the people that loved her and supported her.
"Shouldn't we call the vet" Christina said urgently.
"Yes but she's only been in labor for half an hour" Ashleigh said calmly but pulled out her cell phone and called just to tell the vet. Suddenly Image made a loud grunt and out came the foals body just like that. Melanie gasped even threw the mucus she could see the foals face it had a white snip on the nose and a small star on its head.
"Ok girl you can get up now" Melanie said to the mare and Ashleigh rushed in and cleaned off the foal. While Melanie watched her mare grunt in pain once more she almost freaked but before she could say anything Ashleigh laughed in delight.
"It's a boy" Ashleigh cried "A healthy little colt"! But Melanie could not share in their delight because something was defiantly wrong with her and all she could do is hold the mares head.
"Ashleigh something is wrong with her" She said loudly, "Chris come in here and take care of the foal and somebody call the vet I think something more is coming"! Everybody nodded and did something.
"Mel I think Image is going to have another foal" Ashleigh said as she bit her lip worriedly. Melanie felt her eyes grow larger and sweat break out on her brow.
"Oh no" Melanie cried. She knew it wasn't good for a mare to have more than one foal and if the mare and foals lived one foal would probably have to go to a sergeant mother. Clasping her hands and praying Melanie hoped for the best. Suddenly the next foal came out with ease and Image turned around as fast as she could and licked both foals until they dried.
“Ash do you think they are going to be fine” Melanie asked as she stroked Images sweaty neck and felt tears fall from her eyes.
“She should be and she is a new mother so she could be ok with twin foals and they do seem to be fine but just incase lets let Dr. Collins check them over” Ashleigh smiled weakly.
“By the way what is Image’s new foal” Melanie asked as she rubbed the colt dry and bonded with the big foal.
“It’s a healthy little filly” Ashleigh laughed. Melanie smiled at the filly and saw how much alike she looked like her father but had the face of her mother.
“Oh their just perfect” She cried as she let the big sturdy colt go to his mother. Crawling over to the filly Melanie laughed in delight as she saw how perfect she was, small but perfect.
“Wow Melanie they are just perfect” Jazz said as he walked in the stall. Turning around Melanie smiled and then her smile turned into a beam.
“They are aren’t they, I just hope Image can handle the two foals” She sighed and started to bond with the filly. Soon people started to form around the stall and make comments about how beautiful the foals where and their chances for life and the same for Image.
“Oh Image” Melanie whispered as the mare stood up and let her foals nurse. Hugging the mare tightly and kissing Image on the nose she left the mare and let them rest until the vet showed up.
“Melanie we are so lucky” Jazz whispered as they left the barn. He quickly wrapped his arms around Melanie and kissed her forehead. “What are we going to name them” Jazz whispered as he picked up some snow.
“I wasn’t thinking about that all I care about is the health of Image’s foals” Melanie smiled. Closing her eyes she saw the foals in a couple years racing against the win the win an important race by many lengths.
“Maybe we could call the colt Black Flame because after I dried him his coat was as dark as the night and the fire in his eyes just showed the passion he has for something, and you can name the filly” She breathed.
“Hm.. I like Classy Image, because she is so pretty and looks like she has class even for a small filly” Jazz laughed.
“I love it! Class and Flame” She squealed as she hugged Jazz spontaneously. Then the sound of a truck roll up made then jump apart and see what had come. The smile had left her face and she frowned when she saw Brad Townsend step out of the truck with a smirk on his face.
“I heard Image had Celtic Mist’s foals today” Brad said with a silky business man voice.
“Yes she did twins in fact, one filly one colt” Jazz said proudly as they walked to the barn. To Melanie’s surprise she saw the vet coming out with a bright smile on his face.
“Ah Ms. Graham and Mr. Taylor you are very lucky that Image is still alive, the trauma of having two foals can be life taking but Image seems to be fine and her foals are in beautiful health and all ready nursing, Good Day” Dr. Collins said as he walked by.
“Was that supposed to be encouraging” She asked Jazz almost giggling. Jazz looked at her and cracked a smile. When they got to the stall Melanie almost laughed when she saw Class and Flame frolicking around their mother and Image’s tired face but proud look.
“Nice Very Nice” Brad said quietly as he watched them frolic. But when Image caught sent of Brad the mares head flew up and she pushed her foals behind her.
“Easy little girl” Jazz said soothingly. Image relaxed a little but still held her ground.
“Now the filly seems a little small she’s nice and all but she doesn’t seem to have the same appearance as the colt” Brad said critically.
“Now Brad don’t let her small size fool you, you remember how small Star was and look how well he did” Melanie said as she watched the foals. Brad looked at her and shrugged. Melanie smiled as she thought of Wonder’s Star, he was now five and had just finished a great four year old season where he had won many and lost few and his five year old season was bright because now he was being prepped for the Dubia World Cup, Melanie remembered how phyced everyone was at the farm when they had found out how .
“Well I must go now and later I will discuss with you the future of our next champion” Brad said and with that he walked out of the barn and sped off.
“It’s all right Image just go to sleep now and you can have some quality time with your little precious jewels” Melanie whispered as she kissed the mare’s nose and left with Jazz.
“Happy” Jazz murmured as he brushed away the strands of hair from her face. Nodding Melanie kissed Jazz and then leaned against him.
“Well I should be because Image just delivered two beautiful healthy foals and they both lived and she did and Jinx is racing in the Donn soon” She cried spinning around in circles.
Even though she was twenty years old she felt like a little girl again with everything that was happening she just couldn’t help it. But how long would it last before something bad happened.
) and doesn't Caitlin's start with a K? 
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