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xzxpixureperfectxzx 
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(1/25/04 9:27 pm)
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Poem
yah i dont really title my poems until after i write them and this one i havnt written yet i qam literaly making it up as i type so sorry if it is really sucky

Beyond the smiles
lies the heart of a child
easily broken, easily repaired
or so they said
but easy said aint easy done
and to her they are blind
not seeing the darkness before them
only searching for the light
cold hands clutch the memories
of the pain
and it all seems so real
over and over again

I think i shall dub this 'Again'

ok yah that sucked but whatever i have an excuse i am tired :\


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SingHokeyPokey 
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Posts: 340
(2/4/04 5:27 pm)
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wow, i really liked this, mel!:D It was really good. I enjoyed it. and i think you should call it "Again":b






Cause you and I both loved
What you and I spoke of
And others just read of and if you could see me now
Well that I’m almost finally out of
I’m finally out of, Finally-dee-deedle le dee dee
Well I’m almost finally, finally
Out of words


...You and I both...

xzxpixureperfectxzx 
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(2/4/04 5:28 pm)
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Spiffy chicken! thankyou muchos omg dontcha love how the thingy is 'poem' Mwhaha

The first cut is the deepest
Baby I know the first cut is the deepest
But when it comes to being lucky he's cursed
When it comes to loving me he's worst



I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice cubes stuck in my nose"
"Behind every good man there is a good woman and behind that another man looking at her a**
"Guys are like lava lamps there fun to look at just not so bright!
Chemistry is a class you take in high school or college, where you figure out two plus two is 10, or something."
- Dennis Rodman, NBA Basketball player, on Chicago Bull's team chemistry being overrated
The streets are safe in Philadelphia. It's only the people who make them unsafe."
- Frank Rizzo, ex-police chief and mayor of Philadelphia

Siggyluver17
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(2/4/04 9:02 pm)
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Re: Poem
*pokes back* I liked it:)

xzxpixureperfectxzx 
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(2/5/04 5:17 pm)
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*repokes* thankyou

The first cut is the deepest
Baby I know the first cut is the deepest
But when it comes to being lucky he's cursed
When it comes to loving me he's worst



I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice cubes stuck in my nose"
"Behind every good man there is a good woman and behind that another man looking at her a**
"Guys are like lava lamps there fun to look at just not so bright!
Chemistry is a class you take in high school or college, where you figure out two plus two is 10, or something."
- Dennis Rodman, NBA Basketball player, on Chicago Bull's team chemistry being overrated
The streets are safe in Philadelphia. It's only the people who make them unsafe."
- Frank Rizzo, ex-police chief and mayor of Philadelphia

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