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xX0Sterling0Xx
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(12/28/03 1:19 pm)
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Parker and Christina- Not As Clean as They Seem ... Rated R
Chapter One

Seventeen-year-old Christina Reese flopped over in her bed and glanced at her alarm as it rang incessantly in her ear. 5:00 AM. Time to get up.

She dragged herself out of bed and across the dark room, fumbling around for a pair of breeches and tee shirt. Christina got dressed in the dark and closed her eyes, thinking of the amazing night she'd had just a few hours ago with her boyfriend, Parker Townsend.

She had gone over to Parker's house, where they had hung out in his bedroom and hidden from his obnoxious, rude parents. How did two horrible people like them make an amazing kid like Parker? she wondered for the zillionth time.

Christina placed a hand on her neck. She flipped on the light switch and winced as the bright light flooded the room. Staring at her reflection in the mirror, her eyes focused on the hickey on her neck.

Last night, she and Parker had been making out very intensely. She couldn't help but smile as she thought of her sexy boyfriend, with his tousled brown hair, smoky gray eyes, and amazingly buff body. He had been so different ... so passionate ... so horny.

As Christina hurried around the room to get dressed, she couldn't help but wonder whether she and Parker would go any further. Tonight they had a date planned, and Christina really wanted to see how Parker would be after seeing his wilder side the previous night.

Gathering her curly auburn hair into a ponytail, she shook all thoughts of sex out of her head. She had horses to ride. She didn't have time to think about Parker. But she knew she wouldn't be able to wait for later tonight.


MY SHEXXIE MEN!!!

You know you're horse crazy when your non horsey friend gets into your car and gives you a weird look when seeing all your whips and spurs in the backseat

mdnttoddy@yahoo.com

xoxo
MaXiNe

Edited by: xX0Sterling0Xx at: 12/28/03 1:20 pm
Make Your Own Coffee
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(12/28/03 3:00 pm)
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Re: Parker and Christina- Not As Clean as They Seem ... Rate
:eek Wow ... never thought someone would write about Chris and Parker's sex life! lol it was good, tho. have more soon!:D










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frostbite423
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(12/29/03 5:02 pm)
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Re: Parker and Christina- Not As Clean as They Seem ... Rate
I'm with Coffee, lol. I like fan fiction that's WAY out of the ordinary, very very different from the series, and you did that very well.

But can I point out some stuff? Is zillionth a word? lol, sorry, I don't know all my numbers over a billion, so you might be correct. And "She had horses to ride. She didn't have time to think about Parker. But she knew she wouldn't be able to wait for later tonight." You could combine "She had horses to ride. She didn't have time to think about Parker." to make one sentence. That would be much easier to read. And, try not to start a sentence with a conjuction(and, but, or, etc...) when writing a story.

Otherwise I think it's great!

Siggyluver17
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(12/30/03 10:58 pm)
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Re: Parker and Christina- Not As Clean as They Seem ... Rate
very nice never thought anyone would write about this:eek gonna be interesting

xX0Sterling0Xx
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(1/3/04 11:48 pm)
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Chapter Two
dun dun dun ... chappie 2
nothing rele exciting happening yet
but here ya go

Chapter Two

As Christina made her way down to the track, she was surprised to see three unusual figures silhouetted against the morning sky. Brad and Lavinia Townsend (Parker’s parents) were leaning on the rail, talking to Christina’s parents, Mike and Ashleigh.

The Townsends and the Reeses were constantly at each others’ throats- ever since they were teenagers Ashleigh and Mike had despised Brad. Obviously the Townsends wanted something.

But even more surprising than Brad and Lavinia’s oh-so-gracious presence was the fact that Parker had tagged along with his parents.

He was sitting up on the rail of the exercise track, talking to one of the exercise riders who sat atop a frisky mare. “Parker,” she called in her soft, Kentucky accent.

Her tall, 6-foot plus boyfriend strode purposefully over to her and slipped his arms around her waist. “Hey,” he whispered in her ear. He ran a hand up and down Christina’s spine, causing her to shiver.

Christina rested her head on his strong, muscular chest. “So why did you guys all come here?” she asked. “Not that I'm not happy to see you,” she said, snuggling up against his cozy gray sweatshirt. She breathed in his sexy, intoxicating smell. The smell of horses mixed with his Abercrombie “Fierce” cologne was so familiar and safe.

Parker rested his chin on top of her head. “My parents want to talk to your parents about one of the mares out of Wonder. They want to breed her or something,” he explained. “I thought I’d come along and see what you were doing.”

Christina wrapped her arms around Parker’s hard, trim waist. “After I ride, wanna go for breakfast or something?” she asked, shooting him a seductive look as she emphasized the word “something”.

“I think I know what ‘something’ is,” Parker responded. “But maybe you can give me a little taste or something?” he asked, a devilish grin on his perfect, handsome face.

“Sure,” Christina replied, with a slight smile. Her hazel eyes sparkled in the early morning light. She stood up on tippy-toes to meet Parker’s mouth with her own. As his hands caressed the back of her neck, her own fingers slipped underneath the hem of his gray polo shirt and began to lightly stroke and massage his (fit) lower stomach muscles.

She felt a familiar churning sensation in her stomach and went wild. Parker knew she had a THING about her neck- all his rubbing and caressing was driving her crazy with a lust for more.

Christina reluctantly pulled away. “I have to ride Star now,” she said. “Then Polo and after that we can go have breakfast,” she continued.

“Or something,” replied Parker with a lustful grin. Dropping a kiss on Christina’s fair cheek, he walked back over to his spot on the rail. “I’ll see you soon.”

lalala
replies for chapter three!


MY SHEXXIE MEN!!!

You know you're horse crazy when your non horsey friend gets into your car and gives you a weird look when seeing all your whips and spurs in the backseat

mdnttoddy@yahoo.com

xoxo
MaXiNe

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(1/4/04 6:31 am)
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Re: Chapter Two
lol, pretty good. Have more soon










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Siggyluver17
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(1/4/04 1:32 pm)
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Re: Chapter Two
nice would like more

xX0Sterling0Xx
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(2/8/04 12:42 am)
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Chappie 3
ahhh my story isnt dead anymore! hahaha yeah i kno i havent posted in 4ever but idk ill c if ne1 still bothers to read this messed up, pervy fic

Chapter Three

Christina slid off the tall black colt named Polo Club and handed him off to his groom, Ken. She smiled as she saw Parker sitting on the rail, watching her every move. Damn, he’s gorgeous, she thought to herself. Taking in the sight of his windblown brown hair and Polo shirt that clung to his athletic body perfectly, she felt herself go weak in the knees.

“Hungry?” was the first word out of her mouth.

Parker laughed softly. “Hello to you, too. Oh, I’m fine, thanks for asking.”

Christina grinned sheepishly. “We went through all that earlier,” she defended. Hopping up onto the rail next to her boyfriend, she rested her head on his shoulder and yawned. “I’m tired,” she groaned. “And hungry,” she added with a slight giggle, after hearing her stomach grumble. She looked around in confusion. “Where’d our parents go?”

Parker smiled down at her. “Your parents suggested they go somewhere to talk, so they all went out for breakfast or drinks or whatever. Your mom said to tell you that they’d be back later in the afternoon, because afterwards your parents need to go look at a filly over in Lexington.”

Christina jumped off the fence. “Very cool,” she replied. “Let’s go inside for five minutes so I can shower and change and we can go.” Grabbing Parker’s hand, she pulled him down off the railing and headed over toward the house.

Up in Christina’s room, Parker flopped down on her bed and rested his hands behind his head. “Hurry up and shower,” he instructed. “Then we can go to the diner, maybe?” he asked hopefully.

Christina rolled her eyes and nodded. She hopped in the shower and started shampooing and soaping herself really well. Five minutes later, she stepped out of the steamy bathroom wrapped in a towel, and marched over to her bureau to pull out some clothes.

She bent over to pick up a light pink tee shirt and heard Parker’s deep, sexy voice behind her. “That towel is extremely short. I like this view,” he teased.

Christina jumped up in surprise. She’d thought that Parker had dozed off for a few minutes. “You perv!” she exclaimed laughingly. Grabbing the rest of her clothes, she hurried into the bathroom to get dressed. As she pulled on a pink g-string and a pair of low-rise jeans, she chuckled to herself. What had gotten into Parker lately?

She re-entered her room and lay down on the bed next to Parker, snuggling in beside him, under the covers. “Let’s not go for breakfast and just stay here,” she mumbled, half asleep.

Parker jumped up and threw the covers off the bed. “Come on, Chris. I’m hungry!” he whined. “I know you want food, too,” he whispered in her ear.

Christina groaned, but opened her eyes anyway. She wrapped her arms around Parker’s neck, and he lifted her up. She nestled into his brawny, well-built chest. “This is nice,” she complimented as he carried her along the hallway and down the stairs.

Parker dropped her on her butt on the leather couch in the den. She glared at him. “I take that back.”

Parker smiled at her, his smoky gray eyes twinkling with mischief. Christina stuck her tongue out at him. “Maybe we won’t go anywhere after all. You can just go back home and hang out with the maids and I’ll stay here and chill with Melanie,” she threatened, referring to her cousin.

Parker collapsed on the couch next to her. “You wouldn’t do that,” he said matter-of-factly, laying his head in her lap. Her breasts loomed above his face. “Hey, this is a nice view, too!” he exclaimed.

“Ugh,” muttered Christina. “You’re such a guy.” Stretching her arms out in front of her, she leapt up off the couch. “Let’s go,” she instructed, pulling Parker’s tall, lean frame off the sofa and dragging him out the front door.

Settling themselves in the red Jeep that Christina shared with her cousin Melanie, the two set off for the diner. Parker draped an arm around Christina’s shoulders as she drove, and began to massage the back of her neck.

Christina glanced at Parker out of the corner of her right eye. She knew there was a little area up ahead where she could pull off to the side for a few minutes. Parker continued to rub his thumb in little circles on the back of her neck, pretending not to notice that she was growing more excited as she drove.

A few seconds later, Christina pulled over and unbuckled her seatbelt. Sliding over, she straddled Parker’s lap and encircled his neck with her slender arms. Leaning forward, she brushed her mouth against his soft lips.

Parker opened his mouth and slid his tongue into her mouth. His tongue began to play with hers, circling it, pushing it back and forth, and causing her to shiver with delight.

Parker’s hands made their way up the front of Christina’s shirt, rubbing and massaging her breasts. His hands ran along the seam of her bra, and stopped on the buckle in back.

Suddenly Parker’s cell phone rang. Christina sat up and glanced down to where it sat in his jeans pocket. An annoyed look came across Parker’s gorgeous face. He reached down and turned it off, not bothering to check whom it was.

Parker glanced up and locked his slate gray eyes on Christina’s hazel ones. “I’m hungry,” he said.

Christina slid off his lap and moved back to her seat, laying her head against the window. She spread her legs and placed them in the air. “Want to eat?” she asked.


MY SHEXXIE MEN!!!

You know you're horse crazy when your non horsey friend gets into your car and gives you a weird look when seeing all your whips and spurs in the backseat

mdnttoddy@yahoo.com

xoxo
MaXiNe

CertifiedBarnRat
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(2/8/04 4:43 pm)
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Chapter 3
lol, it was pretty good. :D have more soon?

Kialua
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(2/8/04 10:58 pm)
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chapter 3
this is good i like it a lot keep writing :b

Siggyluver17
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(2/10/04 3:08 pm)
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Re: Chapter 3
it was pretty good.

SingHokeyPokey 
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(2/10/04 10:48 pm)
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Re: Chapter 3
good. more soon.:b





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Whitebrookroxs90
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(2/10/04 11:11 pm)
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Re: Chapter 3
Parker is on Drug! woooheee!!!

lol jk i love it!

Kialua
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(2/20/04 4:00 pm)
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Re: Chapter 3
Are you still writing??

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