Like That [Pg-13]
ok all i deleted my other 2 stories because they were well bad and sucky so here is my new one and if you like it post because i dont kno if anyone is reading it and yah ....heehee
All Dianna wanted was a little freedom.Which is hard to come by in the Lawrence family.she lives with her divorced father and druggie brother in a ranch style house .When she finnaly decides to take an impropto trip to Hawai.ok yah not sure what to say 4 next summary sentence but yah
"YO DI "
"what is it?" asked diana a girl with fiery red hair that matched her personality.She stodd up prepared to stomp over yell at her brother but instead her foot caught in the trash basket and she tripped falling over
"AARH" she screamed.
Frusterated, she attempted to yank the basket off her foot but it wouldnt budge.Grabbing her hair in her hand she tied it up in a ponytail and walked over to her brother.
"YES"
"Chill just wanted ya to know that my dawg is gnna be staying for food so you need to make more"
Diana's eyes flashed red .
" I AM NOT YOUR SLAVE GO MAKE YOUR OWN FOOD"
"Sorry d" said Bret "um this is Craig"
Diana flushed red realising that they had company "HI"
"hello so i was thinking maybe you and i could..."
"NO "
"well maybe we could..."
" I dont think so "
"what about...."
"LATER"
"yur sis is pi**** man bye"
"bye crai"
"DI look i am sorry i didnt kno i mean crai can be a real loser sometimes"
" Its fine" she said and offered a smile
" Um"
" I know abuot the basket it wont come off"
Bret laughed " oh dad wont be hoime tonight he is going on another date"
"ok mac n cheese or Chef boyardee"
"mac n cheese byardee is nasty"
Quote:A nose in need deserves Puffs indeed
Things to think about....
Why do British people never sound British when they sing?
If Dracula has no reflection, how comes he always had such a straight parting in his hair?
If you mated a bull dog and a shitsu, would it be called a bullshit?
Don't you find it worrying that doctors call treating you their "practice" ?
good, good. there are a few grammer mistakes and all, but it was good. also, it would be nice to explain things. like, all of a sudden craig showed up out of no where and i was totally lost. also, make sure you put whos saying something because it makes reading much better.
Just remember in the winter
Far beneath the bitter snow
Lies the seed
That with the sun's love, in the spring
Becomes the rose
Re: Like That [Pg-13]
craig was there the whole time she just didnt know that yah i know my first few chaps are bad i need to 'get in too it ' ya know?
Yawning Diana crawled out of bed wednesday morning it was almost time to go to schoo.Slowly she pulled on a pair of jeans
and a Blue V neck grabbing her bed she ran out the door.Bret came out about 5 inutes later.
"Dian[pronounced Dye AN ]"Bret yelled
"what is it BERET ?"she called
"Bus here yet?" he asked plopping dwn beside her.
" Yes it came and drove all the street signs to washington"She commented sarcastically
"oh ok cool"bret said and shrugged about half a econd later the bus pulled up
"for once neither of you are late" The bus drivers gruff voice startled Diana causing her to jump blushing furiously she walked onto the bus and grabbed an unclaimed seat
Quote:A nose in need deserves Puffs indeed
Things to think about....
Why do British people never sound British when they sing?
If Dracula has no reflection, how comes he always had such a straight parting in his hair?
If you mated a bull dog and a shitsu, would it be called a bullshit?
Don't you find it worrying that doctors call treating you their "practice" ?
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