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Invincible |PG|
Invincible
By: Hanna G.


Bridge End Farm is located in northern New York, near the boarder of Vermont. It’s in the horse country and about the only English riding barn around the town and some surrounding areas. Darren and Jo Smart, two of New York’s wealthiest horse owners in the state, own the hunter-jumper farm. Living with them is their niece, Alyssa Smart. She’s twelve-years-old, a wonderful rider and a nice girl. Although she’s been through a lot, she still has the courage to move on. Then, her headstrong horse qualifies for the National Hunters End-Of-The-Year Show. Slightly afraid, Alyssa takes on the challenge, which tests the real strength in her and her power to handle the horse.

Edited by: SingHokeyPokey  at: 12/27/03 2:52 pm
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Chapter One
Chapter One:

“Mouse! Get down here! You’re going to be late!”
        Twelve-year-old Alyssa Smart barely heard her aunt as she blared “My Immortal” on her radio. She quickly hit the power button and the music instantly stopped playing. She grabbed her backpack and flung open her door, sending it back too quickly and it banged on her wall. She winced and ran down the hall, pausing at the stairs to glance out the window and look down on her light gray Thoroughbred gelding, Hero. She smiled as she saw him trotting around his green pasture.
        “Alyssa!” Josephine Smart, the child’s aunt, yelled in her warning tone. “Now!”
        Alyssa quickly ran down the stairs and skidded to a stop in front of her aunt, who was waiting by the door.
        “Would you like to be late for your first day of school?” Jo asked her niece as she swung open the door and walked out.
        Alyssa nodded. “Yes, very much so,” she replied to her aunt. She turned and slammed the door shut.
        Jo smiled and laughed. “I don’t make the rules,” she said. “That law does.” She started to walk down the long porch.
        Alyssa jogged to catch up with her aunt. “But we can be late,” she protested.
        Jo glanced at Alyssa and frowned. “Sorry, hon,” she said as they descended the steps and walked to the car. “It’s only for seven hours. Get in the car and go.”
        “Yeah, seven hours that I could be riding!” Alyssa retorted as she slid into the car’s leather interior. She folded her arms across her chest and stared hard at the seat in front of her.
        “Oh, stop, Alyssa,” Jo warned her niece as she turned the car around and drove out of the driveway. “Only three days this week; I think you’ll live.”
        “I don’t think I will,” Alyssa mumbled. Then, she said louder, “I don’t even have any friends! No one will like me. They’ll think I’m a stuck-up snob, Aunt Jo.”
        Jo shook her head. “No, they won’t, sweetie,” Jo assured her niece. “I promise. My best friend’s daughter is in your grade and she’s a doll. She can’t wait to meet you.”
        Alyssa shrugged. “So?” she asked. “Can’t I get home schooled?”
        Jo sighed. “I’ll talk to your uncle today,” she replied softly. “As long as you do something for me.”
        “What’s that?”
        “Invite Marissa, my friend’s daughter, over for a lesson today and then you two can hit the trails.”
        Alyssa thought for a moment and then nodded. “Deal!”


        “So, do you have a horse?” Marissa Anderson asked Alyssa as the girls made their way through the crowded hallways of the middle school. School had finally let out after the seven hours and Marissa has agreed to go home with Alyssa.
        Alyssa nodded. “Yeah,” she replied. “Hero, an eight-year-old light gray Thoroughbred. His show name is Among The Heroes. He was breed to be a stallion, but he was too hard to handle so they geld him. And then he was going to race, but he wouldn’t settle down and get into it. So, they sold him and my aunt and uncle bought him and then gave him to me.”
        Marissa smiled. “I was beginning to wonder what happened to him,” she replied. “I used to ride him at my lessons.”
        “Who do you ride now?” Alyssa wondered.
        Marissa grinned. “I have my own horse,” she told Alyssa. “She’s a colored Warmblood mare. Her sire is Painted Rugged Lark. She’s ten and her name is Majesty, but I call her Magic.”
        “She sounds awesome.” Alyssa smiled. “I think I remember seeing a painted horse in one of the stalls.”
        Marissa nodded. “Yeah, I was coming over for a lesson that day, so Jo brought her in for me. Magic stays outside for most of the day.”
        “So does Hero. He loves it, too. And, he doesn’t get rain rot and his hooves are much stronger than the horses that are kept in twenty-four/seven.”
        Marissa nodded her agreement. “I brought Magic to a clinic once and she was kept up in her stall and she was kind of hard to ride, you know?”
        Alyssa bobbed her head. “Yeah. Hero hates being cooped up, but if he has to, he deals with it.” She looked out at the cars as the girls left the school building. She spotted her aunt’s black Mustang. She began to walk in that direction and Marissa followed. Alyssa slid in the front seat and Marissa in the back.
        “Hi, Ris,” Jo said to the other girl after greeting her niece.
        “Hey,” Marissa replied. “Are you dropping me off at my house so I can get some proper clothes on?”
        Jo nodded and started the car. She waited until it was safe to go and then sped off towards Marissa’s house, fifteen minutes away from the school. When they reached the large Victorian house, Jo slowed the car and Marissa jumped out. She ran to her house and quickly gathered her things, making a fast trip back down to the car.
        “Thanks for letting me have a double lesson this week,” Marissa said to Jo as they cruised down the road that Bridge End was located on.
        Jo smiled. “No problem,” she replied. “I get to work you twice as hard and tease you twice as much! What could be better?”
        Marissa laughed and shook her head. “Always thinking,” she commented.
        “Well, you hafta say two steps ahead of you, you know.”
        Alyssa leaned back in the seat and stared out the window, thinking and listening to bits and pieces of Jo and Marissa throw jokes and such back and forth. She started to think how fun it was to joke … and how it felt. But, lately for the past two years, going on three, she hadn’t felt like joking much, or talking for that matter. It still hadn’t fazed her that in exactly one week and one day would mark the three-year anniversary of her parents’ death. She winced at the thought and sighed. Life was sure different without, spending most of the past two years with her grandparents in Washington State and then transferring over to her aunt and uncle’s farm that summer.
        “Hey, Mouse, what’s wrong?” a soft, quiet voice asked.
        Alyssa looked over to her left and saw her aunt studying her with a worried face. The young girl shook her head. “Nothing,” she fibbed. “Just tired, I guess. School tires you out, you know.” She plastered a fake grin on her face, although that made her aunt smile back.
        “Okay,” Jo said. “Just making sure you were alright.”
        Yeah, I’m okay, Aunt Jo, Alyssa thought, turning her head and rolling her eyes. My parents’ death date is coming up in a week, that’s all. Not like you’re s’posed to remember or care.       
They finally reached the farm and Alyssa jumped out of the car and fled into the house, charging to he room. She slammed her door, threw her backpack aside and jumped on her bed, belly down. She buried her head in one of her pillows and squeezed her eyes shut, making sure no tears escaped her ice blue eyes.
        Get ahold of yourself, Smart, she scolded herself mentally. Just move on like you have these past two years!
        Alyssa finally rolled off her bed and grabbed her riding clothes. She put on the black breeches and her “Happy Tails” T-shirt. She picked up her helmet after putting on her boots and headed out the door, grabbing her apple treats as she did. She skipped down the stairs and did so all the way down to the barn. When she reached the big barn, she put a smile on her face and entered the barn. She walked down the aisle and placed her things near the tack room. She entered and grabbed a rope halter, which she had made for Hero. She had chosen the colors light sky blue and light yellow for the gelding. She then walked out of the barn and past the house to Hero’s paddock.
        “Hey, buddy,” Alyssa greeted the Thoroughbred happily as she slipped on the halter. Hero grunted and looked at her. She smiled back and fed him the treats she had in her hand. He greedily chomped on them and then she walked him back to the barn.
        “Your aunt says to hurry up.”
        Alyssa glanced over her shoulder at the voice as she did the girth. “Hi, Uncle Darren,” she said. “Tell her to start without me. I’ll be there in a few.”
        Darren nodded and retreated from the barn. As Alyssa pulled the girth up higher, Hero pinned his ears and kicked out. As he did so, he craned his neck around and sank his teeth into Alyssa’s side. Alyssa yelped and jumped back. Hero stared at her, his ears pinned. The light-brown haired girl held her side for a while until the pain stopped. She bit her lip and quickly did the girth once again, being cautious this time.
        “How nice of you to join us,” Jo teased Alyssa as her niece entered the outdoor ring.
        Alyssa scowled and brought down her stirrups.
        “What’s wrong, Mouse?” Jo asked Alyssa, walking over to her.
        “Hero bit me,” she replied flatly as she checked the girth.
        “Why?”
        “Because of his girth.”
        Jo studied the horse. “He’s never done it before?”
        Alyssa shook her head. “Never even pinned his ears before.”
        “Hmm.” Jo studied Hero for several seconds while her lesson trotted around the ring. “Well, get on and we’ll see how he acts.”
        Alyssa nodded and Jo gave her a leg-up. She placed her feet in the stirrups and collected one of her reins. Jo moved back into the center of the ring and Alyssa bent her horse both ways, releasing when Hero released his pressure. She patted his neck and sent him off at a walk. She then picked up one rein and bent his head around and moved his hindquarters. She did the same with the other side and then did the front legs. Finally, she joined the rest of the trotting group.
        “Half seat!” Jo called out as the group broke into a canter.
        Alyssa stood in her stirrups and grabbed some of Hero’s mane. Hero flicked his ears back and Alyssa rubbed his neck with her fist that held the reins. Hero rounded the bend, rounding his body as he did so, and then cantered down the straight.



hope you enjoyed!:D










But she’s cool like a soda can sittin’ on ice
Always orders sushi, only eats the rice

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I got a sweet gig rakin’ in the cash with karaoke
I get the crowd goin’ when I sing the hokey pokey



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love it, hun! absolutely LOVE mouse! tee hee, tis marvelous, darling, simply marvelous! ;)

SingHokeyPokey 
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lol, thanks. I have more ... and I think I kinda got carried away with the 2nd chapter.



Chapter Two:

“Watch out!” Alyssa yelled as Hero broke from his smooth canter into a gallop. Ahead of her, one of the lesson students, Carly, looked over her shoulder for a quick second. She saw Hero and Alyssa galloping and maneuvered her bay mount into the inside of the ring, stopping the prancing gelding.
        Alyssa pulled on Hero’s reins, but the horse didn’t respond. He galloped on, head down low, ears pricked forward. Alyssa followed his ears and saw what lay ahead. She rolled her eyes and pulled on one rein. The horse’s head turned that way, but he still thundered on.
        “Hero!” Alyssa yelled as she gave the horse back his head.
        Finally, Hero skidded to a stopped, his back legs swinging under his body and dirt flying from all sides. Alyssa was thrown forward, unprepared for the sudden stop, and then Hero collected himself. He bent his head down and nuzzled Alyssa’s dog.
        “So you wanna be a reining horse, do ya?” Alyssa asked him. She pulled his head away from the dog. “Go to the house, now, Lucky!” The dog turned and ran towards the house.
        “Everything alright, Mouse?” Jo called from the center of the ring, a worried expression on her face.
        Alyssa looked over at her twenty-three-year-old aunt and nodded. “Yeah,” she called back. “I think Hero wanted to test his reining skills.”
        Jo laughed. She cued for Alyssa to come into the ring and for everyone else to get back to cantering. Alyssa pointed her horse towards the middle of the large arena and stopped when she reached her aunt.
        “You wanna canter some more?” Jo asked as she rubbed Hero’s neck. The gelding put his head in the air and tilted away from the rub. You could tell that he was enjoying it.
        Alyssa nodded. “Yeah, I sent Lucky to the house,” she replied.
        Jo nodded. “Get out there!”
        Alyssa smiled and put Hero out on the rail. She then positioned her legs and sent Hero out on the correct lead. After rounding the arena a few times, the group slowed to a trot and then a walk.
        “Okay!” Jo called out to the group. “Carly, I want you to start trotting down this line, but then began that canter. You’re going to canter over these poles and then jump that cross rail. Got it?” Carly nodded. “Everyone else have it?” The rest of the group nodded. “Good, begin.”
        Carly steered her light bay mount down the long line towards the jump. She then popped him into a canter. Her horse cantered evenly over the poles and then jumped big over the cross rail, making Carly look slightly off-balanced.
        “Weren’t prepared?” Jo asked as she cued Marissa to do the same thing. Carly made her way into the middle of the ring and consulted with Jo.
        Finally, it was Alyssa’s turn to go. Hero trotted first big steps and then cantered with small, paced steps. He was looking at the obstacle ahead. He cantered over the three poles and then cantered one step and then jumped. Alyssa had already been in her half-seat when they cantered over the poles. After the jump, Hero bucked. Alyssa was thrown forward on his shoulder and then tumbled off of him. Her mount pranced away from her and then stopped. He lowered his head and walked over to Alyssa. She was sitting on her rump and was looking up at the gray Thoroughbred. He nudged her in her chest and then pressed his head against her.
        Jo came running over. “Are you okay?” she asked, squatting down beside Alyssa.
        The young girl nodded. “I’m fine, Aunt Jo,” she replied. “Hero was just feeling good, huh, boy?” The big horse just rubbed his face in Alyssa’s shirt.
        “Do you hurt anywhere?” her aunt persisted.
        Alyssa shook her head and jumped up. Hero’s ears were pricked and his eyes big. He collected his neck and scrunched it up like a Dressage horse. Alyssa smiled and rubbed his forehead. The big horse leaned into it and nosily blew out from his lips.
        “Wanna try that again?” Jo asked.
        Alyssa looked at Hero. There was something in his eyes that she didn’t trust. She shook her head. “No, I’ll just canter around and practice lead changes.”
        Jo nodded. “Alright,” she replied. “See me after this lesson.” She turned and instructed the rest of the lesson.
        Alyssa stared after her aunt’s back and quickly hopped on Hero’s back. Marissa walked over to them. She had her horse on a loose-rein.
        “Hey, you alright?” she asked.
        Alyssa nodded. “I’m fine.”
        Marissa and Alyssa began to walk off, side by side. Hero edged his nose over towards Magic and butted noses with his paddock mate. Magic whinnied and butted Hero back.
        Alyssa smiled. “Well, I gotta get him moving.” She said a goodbye to Marissa and pushed Hero into a canter. The Thoroughbred cantered away from Magic, his ears flicked back towards Alyssa. She rose into a half-seat and dropped her reins. Hero stayed at the steady pace, not even caring that he could gallop off. Instead, he flicked his ears back, waiting for Alyssa to cue him. Finally, she increased her pressure and Hero smoothly went into a gallop. Alyssa picked up one rein and Hero instantly slowed and stopped. The young girl threw her arms around Hero’s neck and rubbed his neck.
        “What a good boy you are!” she praised her mount. She let go of his neck and Hero craned his neck around and lipped Alyssa’s pants. She rubbed his forehead and then told him to walk off. He did.


        After the lesson was over, Alyssa went to see her aunt.
        “I want you to try that jumping exercise again,” she told her niece. “I know that Hero can make it over a cross rail without bucking you off.”
        Alyssa sighed, but nodded. She turned her mount down the lane. When she was in line again, she trotted and then broke him into a canter. Once again, Hero paced himself over the poles, took one stride and then jumped. He landed and cantered away from the jump. Alyssa didn’t fall or get bucked off.
        She trotted him towards Jo and then stopped. “I think before he was just feeling good,” Jo concluded. “He was listening to you.”
        Alyssa nodded. “Yeah,” she agreed. “I was cantering him and I let my reins go and he stayed at his canter, which when I do that, he usually gallops. And then I told him to gallop and then I pulled on one rein and he slowed right down and stopped.”
        Jo nodded. “He was defiantly feeling good about himself,” she repeated. “Wanna try a jump your size now?”
        Alyssa nodded. “Sure,” she said. She was currently jumping 3’4”. Jo raised the jump to about that height and then spread out the poles. She then walked back over to Alyssa.
        “Okay, I want you to trot that pole way down there, canter the second one, trot the last and then canter to the jump. Understood?”
        Alyssa nodded. She sent Hero out into his trot and went over the first pole. She cantered the second, trotted the last and then cantered towards the jump. As she rose into a half-seat, Jo called out, “Drop your reins!”
        Alyssa did as she was told and reached farther up the mane. Hero then took off and landed on the other side. He did a lead change and then Alyssa told him to slow. The big horse listened and dropped his pace. She walked into the middle where her aunt was standing.
        “Good or bad?” she asked.
        “Good,” Jo replied. “Very good.” She grinned. “Now, get off, take the saddle off and put on this halter.”
        “Over the bridle? Under it? Take the bridle off?” Alyssa asked as she dismounted. She ran-up her stirrups and then started to loosen the girth. She then pulled off the saddle.
        “Take the bridle off,” Jo told her as she handed her the halter and lead.
        Alyssa frowned, but took the halter from her aunt. She took off Hero’s Hunter bridle and replaced it was the blue halter and lead. She had ridden bareback before, but she wasn’t sure what her aunt was going to have her do.
        “Lemme give you a leg-up.”
        Alyssa was popped onto Hero’s back quickly and she then put her legs in the right position.
        “You’re not making me, are you?” she regarded her aunt.
        Jo just smiled knowingly. “Just go out on the rail and trot.”
        Alyssa obeyed her aunt and sent Hero into his flowing trot. She could easily sit to the trot bareback.
        “Trot over this,” Jo called out.
        Alyssa looked to the inside of the ring. He aunt was standing next to a cross rail.
        She shook her head. “No way, Aunt Jo.”
        Jo cocked her head. “Scared?”
        Alyssa blushed and stopped Hero. “No,” she replied. “Just because I don’t want to jump bareback doesn’t mean I’m scared. It simply means that I don’t feel safe.”
        “You’re scared.”
        “I am not!”
        Jo sighed. “Just try it.”
        Alyssa reluctantly gave in. She popped the gelding into a trot and grabbed the mane as they neared the small jump. Hero broke into a canter a stride before the jump and sailed off it, jumping too big and throwing Alyssa off. She pulled him up and turned to face her aunt.
        “He totally caught me off guard,” she said.
        Jo shrugged. “Work with him on it.” She turned and left the ring.
        Some help you are, Alyssa thought as she began to cool Hero off. The gelding snorted and eyed the jump warily, side-passing away from it. Oh, stop! Sometimes Hero could really get on her nerves.



Enjoy!



Just remember in the winter
Far beneath the bitter snow
Lies the seed
That with the sun's love, in the spring
Becomes the rose





[[Real eyes, Realize, Real lies]]

Edited by: SingHokeyPokey  at: 1/19/04 7:14 am
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FABULOUS!!!

muahaa, i've been waiting for more of this! ;) was perfect, wonderful, beautiful, marvelous, etc...
anyways, have more soon please!

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ahh, i have writers block on this story, so i have no clue how long it'll be until i have more.:( srry






And I want to thank you
For giving me the best day of my life
Oh, just to be with you
Is like having the best day of my life

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Fantastic! Don't you wry 'bout that writer's block they may seem horrific @ the time but sooner or later it'll break down and you can write again trust me. Why don't you try writing another story till the block breaks down it always helps me.





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umm do you mind making your siggy smaller.. it makes people with Dial Up have the pages download slower


More than just a pretty face

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Sry I fixed it.





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um, guys ... yeah, i still have writer's block! lol maybe i opened the story and sat there and looked at it, i'd get an idea ... :p




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Keep trying.





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