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Whitebrookroxs90
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(1/6/04 5:18 pm)
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Colliding Worlds PG-13
Ok this is a fan fic i am sticking with and i think it will be good!!! Hope you like

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Alexis Marks is the fifteen year old daughter of Brent Marks who is the owner of the New York Yankees and the New York Jets lets just say she is rich. On the other hand Jack Nelson is the sixteen year old son of Samantha and Tor Nelson owners of Whisperwood who is known all over the United States for training and breeding phenomenal sport horses. Alexis is wild and crazy and Jack is calm and conservative but when their two worlds collide they find out they aren’t that much different at all.


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(1/7/04 6:30 am)
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sounds interesting.










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(1/7/04 7:34 pm)
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The bright sun was fading as day turned into night. The pink and yellow sky was fading and the day was ending fast. Moving around to get comfortable the slow squeaky sound over a leather saddle rang throughout the deadly silent night. Before one last look Alexis Marks saw the green rolling hills of England fade away.

“Come on Sunny” The blonde said clucking the palomino into a slow gallop towards her summer home. Sometimes Alexis wished she could just have a normal family one who’s father is a workaholic and they barely see them and her two older brothers are the best quarterbacks for the best college teams and she was a teen beauty who had it all the looks the brains the body and especially her riding ability.

As the pair galloped into the view of the multimillion dollar mansion Alexis saw to her dismay her fathers car rolling out of the long drive. Deciding to catch him at the gate Alexis gave Sunny a slap on the rump and galloped after the white limo. Cutting through a small forest Alexis finally found her way out of it just in time to see her fathers car roll away into the darkening sun.

“@#%$” She muttered as Sunny skidded to a stop just inches away from the big black gate which glistened in the little light. The young gelding tossed his head and snorted loudly so loudly that her other horse Spirit returned the snort with a whinny that was so sharp it could cut a pillow. Feeling a little bit angry Alexis slapped her knee and screamed in frustration. Then looking at big barn behind Spirit she smiled thinking of Spirits new girlfriend Aquatic Dream.

Below her Sunny stomped anxiously as if to say “I’m hungry”. Alexis smiled and patted her favorite horse then pushed him into a trot. When she got to the stone barn the stable boy rushed out and smiled.

“Did you have a nice ride Lexi” Andrew Anniston said with a warm smile. At nineteen the strong stable boy had become Alexis best friend and ex-boyfriend but they where still best friends.

“Oh it was the best I could never not love riding Sunny” She laughed jumping off and giving the golden gelding to Andrew and giving Sunny a big hug. Looking into Andrew she couldn’t help but feel her old feelings rise up again but she stopped herself and reminded herself that he had dumped her and had cheated on her. “Oh I have to go” She giggled then sprinted to her house and shouted good bye as she jumped inside her house.

Hopping on the couch and turning on the tv she saw her crush Christian DaMarlow and she squealed. Something about him made her just smile maybe it was his eyes or his smile or maybe it was his shaggy hair or maybe it was because he had stared in like so many top movies and he was hot and he was single. She started to got bored and then clicked off the television and sprinted to the other side of the house to the kitchen.

“Hey Jock what’s for dinner” She asked the main chef when she burst into the cooking room. The gourmet chef looked up and smiled. His face was spattered with a sauce and his shirt was stained.

“Well since your father is actually coming to dinner for the first time in months he asked it be very nice because he is bringing home a lot of people for a party” The big man said as he tasted something.

“Great let me guess they will have sons of rich people and I am going to have to flirt with them to make their parents go with dad or whatever and I have to wear a formal outfit witch means I need to go shopping” She laughed then sprinted to the phone to call her best friend Jaime to see if Jaime could pick her up.

“Don’t you have the Bentley” Jaime said laughing.

“Yes but I cant drive without a licensed adult in the car” She whined. Finally Jaime said yes and said she would pick her up as soon as she could. Then running upstairs Alexis changed into her black jean mini skirt and her light blue halter top then put on her black leather boots. Finally adding some make-up she sprinted downstairs.

“By Jock and Pierre I am going to shop” She cried flying out the door just as Jaime pulled up in their limo. “Jaime I thought we where going in your dads BMW” She whimpered as she jumped in the black limo.

“Come on Lexi you know with all the stuff we buy in England takes up the whole friggin car anyway my dad suggested it” Jaime laughed in her British accent. When they got to the store they where going they both jumped out and sprinted inside.

After about an hour of finding the perfect dress she had found it, it was a white and blue sideways striped it looked fantastic it totally set off her bright blue eyes and not to mention her long straight blonde hair. Jaime found a gold dress that went all the way to the floor and it made her light brown hair absolutely glow.

“I don’t know why I am looking for a dress I am not going to the party am I “ She asked after she choose the complete outfit.

“Of course you can even bring Peter” Alexis winked mentioning Jaime’s famous model boyfriend. Alexis saw Jaime blush and laugh.

“Ohmigosh those shoes go perfect with those earing’s and that dress it is just fabulous” Jaime cried as she saw the dress.

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Later that night Alexis and Jaime where in front of Alexis’s huge bathroom mirror putting on make-up. Alexis couldn’t help but feel hot because she did look like it.

“Holy @#%$ Alexis your boobs are two times bigger than mine” Jaime cried when she finished putting her dress on.
                                                                       
“Jaime I am only a thirty two c” She laughed then saw the shock on Jaimes face and giggled wildly.

“Alexis you are so skinny I am a thirty six b” Jaime laughed. Feeling a little embarrassed they both went downstairs and saw so many people. Then widening her eyes she couldn’t believe it when she saw Christian DaMarlow and she gasped.

“Oh my god Jaime its him” She squealed as she gripped Jaimes arm. “And he is talking to Peter” She cried in a small voice.

“Oh Darling I invited him for you” A smooth voice said from behind her. Turning around she saw her father and gave him a delighted hug.

“Daddy you actually came to your own party” She cried kissing his cheek.

“Yes I did, Nice to see you Jaime welcome to our small get together” Her father said then walked downstairs and met with people. Taking a deep breath she and Jaime linked arms and walked gracefully down the stairs.

“This will be a night to remember” She thought to herself and she stepped to the next step.

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Sinking down on her bed Alexis laughed in delight. The party had been awesome and she had even spent the whole time with Christian and they had talked and everything he had even kissed her on the cheek good night, and the best part was she had found out that her father wanted to buy a school home in Kentucky and also have RACEHORSES. But that would mean leaving Jaime unless she could bring Jaime with her for the summer.

The only thing Alexis could think about is how perfect her life was and how great she had it.

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(1/7/04 7:43 pm)
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Re: Colliding Worlds PG-13
Oooh, very nice. I like it. have more soon




These wounds won't seem to heal,
This pain is just too real,
There's just too much that time cannot erase,

When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears,
When you'd scream I’d fight away all of your fears,
and I held your hand through all of these years,
But you still… have… all of me

Whitebrookroxs90
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(1/8/04 7:16 pm)
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“I’m sorry Jack baby but it’s over I just want to be single before I go to camp” Trista said as she broke up with the sixteen year old Jack .

“Ok well good bye” He said as he hung up. Crossing his arms and walking outside Jack Nelson glared at the bright sunny sky. “Why does every girl I know end up braking up with me” He muttered. Sitting down on the swinging chair Jack felt like he wanted to scream.

He and Trista had been together for four years and had even done it three times. Jack had thought they would have been together forever but he guessed wrong.

“What’s wrong honey” His mother Samantha said as she walked up the stairs to their house?

“Trista broke up with me” Jack said crossing his arms and banging his head against the wooden post. When he looked up his vision was a bit blurry but it cleared when he saw tons of horses galloping or grazing in their pastures. Well not tons maybe twenty but still that was a lot.

Then he saw a horse who stood out from them all it was a dark silver with big round dapples that shone brighter than the sun. The special horse had four black stockings and a unusual black diamond on its forehead. The horses name was Finn Dreams she was the daughter of Finn Mcoul and Sweet Dreams. She had everything she needed to be a perfect jumped but I guess she wanted to race because she hated to see jumps all she wanted to do is run. Dreams was the best horse Whisperwood and she could be the best racehorse but his parents only wanted eventers and steeplechasers.

“Oh Jack baby I a so sorry” His mother whispered kissing his forehead. “But it means that Trista is not the one, some day some how you will find that special girl”. Hugging his mom and walking down to Dreams pasture. When the silver ghost saw him she reared and galloped over to him.

“Hey girl” He whispered jumping into the paddock and scratching her chin. The gorgeous filly bobbed her head and whinnied in delight.

“Oh girl I cant believe she broke up with me” He said talking to her as the walked around the paddock. The big filly seemed to listen to everything he had said. Then noticing that his father Tor was walking towards him Jack stopped and leaned on Dream.

“She is such a beautiful animal” Tor said stroking the filly’s soft silky mane. Then looking at Jack , Tor seemed to have a lot on his mind. “Jack this may be hard but..” He started.

“But what” Jack said with his eyes widening. Gripping on to the filly Jack awaited the news and by the look in his fathers eyes he could tell it was bad real bad.

“Well I know this will hurt but we have to sell Dreams” The big man said in a stern voice.

“Sweet Dreams you mean” Jack said gasping in a short breath. His heart started to pound like the sound of horses hooves, his breath caught in his throat as he looked from his father to his beloved filly.

“No Finn Dreams” Tor said quietly. Then glaring at his father Jack wanted to scream.

“Why, Why her just because she doesn’t want to jump does it mean she isn’t good enough for this stupid farm, she is the best damn horse on the farm” He said his voice rising. Dream put her nose on his shoulder and huffed quietly.

“Jack Alex Nelson don’t you dare use that tone of voice with me” His father boomed. Dream got scared and galloped off kicking her heels up.

“Just look at her she could be such an awesome racehorse” He cried watching the filly gallop free.

“That’s why we are selling her and we could buy at least three good horses for her price” Tor said at a business standpoint. Glaring at his father Jack stormed off to grab his Dutch Warmblood mare Chilly.

“Come on girl we are going for a ride” He whispered putting her french bridle on and jumping on. As the pair galloped down Kentucky Blvd the mare he saw a huge house with four huge nice looking barns a big training track and tons of pastures.

“Wow” He said in awe then a someone riding a golden stallion came cantering around the corner. The rider was a girl with long blonde hair and a gorgeous face not to mention a great body.

“Woah” She said skidding to a stop. Her pearly white teeth almost glittered and her voice was like an angel. Then shaking his head Jack cleared all his thoughts and smiled.

“Hi I’m Alexis and this is Sunny” She said patting the horses golden neck. She had a bit of a British accent and it was lovely.

“I’m Chilly and this is Jack” He said then slapping his head he blushed. “I mean I’m Jack and this is Chilly” He said correcting himself.

“I figured that” She giggled. “We just moved here from England well this is my new school home England is my first half summer home” She smiled.

“Oh well I live at Whisperwood the place not to far down and that’s my full time home” He smiled. Alexis lightly laughed and sighed.

“My daddy moved us down here because he wants to start a thoroughbred racing operation, I’m so excited I love horse racing” Alexis said laughing in delight. “Well I got to go with my dad New York to go have a party with daddy’s teams”.

“Teams what do you mean” He asked?

“The New York Yankees and the New York Jets he owns them” She said obviously embarrassed. Then saying a quick good bye and smiled then galloped away. Jack suddenly felt the need to gallop after her but he didnt. For some reason she appealed to him, maybe it was her blue eyes or her perfect riding or maybe even her looks but all he could tell was he was going to have a new friend.

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(1/8/04 8:21 pm)
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Re: Colliding Worlds PG-13
Ooooh! I like!:D Have more soon!










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(1/10/04 4:13 pm)
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Re: Colliding Worlds PG-13
i like want mroe!

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