Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Ok so this is the next book in the Ally series !
[b]Ally Grahm has just put her perfect world back together. A filly who is making her way through the pack. The boyfriend of her dreams, the popularity, and the perfect stepfather.
But when herblood father Brad Townsend wants legal rights to her will Ally's perfect world shatter forever or will her Whitebrook friends and family have enough strength to take on The Townsends agian?[/b]
Elegance...speed...stamina...
The power...the exhilaration...the grace...the excitment...
It all come together to make up one great sport and one excellent horse...
Eventing
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Here is the first chap hope u like
Ch:1
The early morning sun peaked over the hill; the freshly raked dirt was about to be pummeled by the thoroughbreds of Whitebrook. Oh how Ally loved Whitebrook…….
“Ally…. Can you hear me, hello earth to Ally”? Taylor Hillock laughed as she wave her hand in front of her face. Blinking her eyes Ally came back to reality, which was middle their free period at Henry Clay High School.
“Yah. I was just. Well Daydreaming” She smiled at her new friends. It felt so weird to have this many friends who were in with the “in crowd” not to mention the boyfriend who was way up in the “in crowd”.
“Ok good job new girl” Her other friend Bristol Briar laughed. Ally rolled her eyes at that name “The new girl”. So she was the new girl but that didn’t madder any more their was another new girl but Ally forgot her name.
“I wouldn’t be talking Ms. Briar YOU where the new girl before Ally” Her other friend Amber Smith smiled. Ally was glad they had moved to Kentucky the people in Kentucky where so much nicer and friendlier and laid back then the people in California.
Ally looked around at her friends. The big group of “popular” girls where made of ten girls. Ally, Taylor, Bristol, Amber, Angel, Kristy, Katie, Lara, Laura and Alison. For the few weeks Ally had been at this school she was immediately entered in the so-called “popular group”.
“Ok while Ally was daydreaming we where talking about my big Super Bowl Party” Taylor smiled as they continued the talk. Ally’s ear immediately pricked at the phrase “Super Bowl”. She was a nut for football; in fact her two favorite things were football and horses.
“So you need to bring a date if you cant find one well then who cares, bring your party clothes and bathing suit my daddy will be heating up the pool for the party and the big screen will be outside so we can watch from the pool” Taylor kept talking. When she finished everybody looked at Ally.
“So who are you bringing” Angel smiled innocently.
“As if they don’t know” She thought. As soon as she was about to answer two hands wrapped around her. Immediately she knew it was Jared.
“Honestly you guys do I have to tell you” She giggled. The seventeen-year-old 11th grader was the guy girls fell over. Luckily he –hopefully- was in love with Ally.
“Just incase you didn’t know its him” She giggled some more while pointing up to him.
“Me… what? What did I do” He asked? The girls burst into a fit of giggles. Sure sometimes the fifteen and sixteen year olds acted like little girls but Ally had to admit it was fun.
“It’s not what you did its what you are going to do” She smiled looking up at him.
“And whats that” He asked sitting down?
“Coming with me to Taylor’s Super Bowl Bash” She smiled.
“Oh…. Ok” He sighed with relief. Ally looked at him weirdly then smiled. Just then all of the girls boyfriends sat next to them. It was funny every girl in the table had a HOTT boyfriend all the time.
Smuggling up to him she smiled as the girls did the same. “So Al –her new nickname- how’s Frosty” Taylor’s boyfriend Alex asked? Ally gladly was willing to talk because everyone at this table was a horse nut or liked horses and they all knew everything about Frosty.
“She’s great I think she might win the Florida Derby next month.. It’s a shame I cant be their” She answered. Leaning back against Jared she smelt his sweet cologne and his winter fresh breathe. “Hm…” She sighed,
“What” Jared asked? She looked up at him and smiled.
“Nothing” She whispered. Ally was happy that Jared was HER man not any ones else’s especially her somewhat cousin Alexis. At the thought of Alexis her cousin and her senior boyfriend walked up. Alexis was in ninth grade and Ally was in tenth grade.
“Hey Lexi” Everybody smiled.
“Hey you guys sorry I’m late… we got hung up” She laughed.
“No problem” Taylor laughed, “We where talking about my Super Bowl Party you are coming aren’t you”?
“Why wouldn’t I” Alexis laughed lightly. Everybody was silent then started chattering about what they would where going to wear. Slipping away from everyone Jared and Ally slipped into the auditorium.
Sitting in Jared lap and getting close to him she nuzzled him. “That’s exactly what Sentential does to me” He smiled holding her tight.
“Well does he do this” She whispered kissing him. Looking into his bright green eyes she smiled.
“Yeah he does” Jared joked. Ally giggled. Pairs of Ally’s table came into the auditorium. The pairs spread out and started talking quietly.
“Five minuets to school is out” She whispered. Swiftly Ally’s lips locked with Jared in a kiss. As they took a breath she looked at her outfit.
A trendy plaid skirt with a top that matched perfectly and a pair of black leather boots. Her usually curly blonde hair was straight and she put on light make up.
Smiling at each other the pair got up and went to Ally’s locker. She was so lucky to have all her friends having this off period.
As she opened her neat locker she quickly took out her homework. “So much homework” She muttered.
“Same here” He laughed.
“I can’t believe I am getting straight A’s when at California I could barely get B’s” Ally said as she snapped her locker shut. Just then a teacher came out and glared at them.
“I am trying to teach a class here close your locker quietly” The teacher said quietly then turned on her heel and left. When the teacher snapped the door shut Jared and Ally laughed loudly.
“Let’s get out of here before she comes out again” Jared smiled. They quickly walked to his locker and waited for the bell to ring.
As the bell rang they awaited their friends to meet up with them. But this time the girls had planned to give their boyfriends a special treat. They planned to model bikinis for the party.
“What are we going to do after school” Jared asked? She didn’t say anything just shrugged innocently. One by one the couples showed up and one by one they drove to the mall.
In Ally’s new truck they had Taylor and Alex, Bristol and Chad, her and Jared and Angel and David. “Ally where are we going” Jared asked again.
“Some where” All the girls answered mischievously. The boyfriends stared at each other dumb founded. When they drove near the mall the girls put blind folds over the guys eyes.
“Can you see anything” They asked.
“No” The guys chorused. As they lead their guys into the malls the ten girls giggled wildly when they sat them down in Bikini’s and more. The guys looked funny in goofy pink chairs.
Ally selected three bikinis then went to the dressing room. The first one she choose was a strapless pink bikini that made her small frame smaller.
“Thankfully I shaved my legs” Taylor whispered.
“Same” Ally answered. Both girls looked in the mirror and smiled. They looked good.
“So everybody got their first bikini on” Ally whispered. The girls nodded energetically them tip toed out and stood in front of their boyfriends.
“Ok guys you can take off your blind folds” Ally called out. One by one the guys took off their blinds and one by one their mouths dropped.
The first to speak was Jared. “Wow” Was all that he managed to say. She smiled fondly at him then another guy spoke it was Alex. “Why do you guys need bikinis in February” He asked?
The surrounding guys hit him and told him to shut up. “For my party stupid” Taylor laughed.
Ally turned around and showed off her bikini and so did the other girls. She walked towards Jared and smiled.
“Happy belated Christmas” She whispered into his ears. Getting up Jared threw his sweatshirt on her.
“Hey” She laughed. “What was that for”?
“Because you are so beautiful everybody will wont you more with more skin shown” He whispered kissing her. Smiling she took it off and went to change.
“It seems this is our boys favorite thing now” Angel laughed wildly. After many bikinis’s Ally found a gorgeous blue one. It was so gorgeous she couldn’t describe it but she also bought three others a rainbow and blue and white and a brown that made her deep dark tan stand out.
As they entered Whitebrook Ally smiled at Jared. “Did you have fun” She asked as they stepped out.
“The best” He laughed hugging her tightly.
“Next week we are going to shop for party clothes” She laughed wiggling her eyebrows.
“Ok” He laughed. Ducking down he kissed her and then stopped to look at her. “Ally…”?
“Yes” She answered.
“I love you,” He murmured. Smiling happily she took his hand and they walked to the old shed. She didn’t answer. “Ally.. do you” He asked?
Smiling secretively she closed the door and kissed him passionately. “Yes I do love you,” She murmured. They sat down and she snuggled in his lap. Putting her head in his neck she smelt the same cologne.
He wrapped his jacket over her and she smiled. “Thanks” She whispered.
“Ah… it was no problemo” He laughed.
“You are so corny” She giggled. Still in his lap he rested his head lightly.
“Me corny, No” he said softly. Pressing against the wall she pressed against him trying to get closer to him and she succeeded.
“Did you like what I bought” She asked.
“Yes I like everything you tried on” He smiled down at her. Beaming back she kissed him. This kiss was slow and calm.
“We kiss so much” She giggled.
“So” He laughed.
“Yah… So” She looked at him then put her head under his chin.
“Did anyone ever tell you that you are gorgeous” He said kissing her neck.
“No” She murmured.
“Did anyone tell you your extraordinary” He whispered kissing her neck again.
“No” She smiled.
Pulling away he looked at her. “Did anyone..” His sentence was stopped short by another voice.
The voice went along with it.. “That you are so in trouble, Ally you are coming with me say goodbye to Jared” It was her mom. Kissing him lightly she murmured her goodbye and shook with fear.
Her mother sounded angry to angry. “Holy @#%$ am I in trouble” She thought as Melanie grabbed her hand and dragged her to the house.
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Very good....too much romance, tho. lol sry
Elegance...speed...stamina...
The power...the exhilaration...the grace...the excitment...
It all come together to make up one great sport and one excellent horse...
Eventing
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
this is the first part so here it is short and stupid!
Plugging her nose Ally dived into the steamy water, unfortunately the top layer was still cold and made her shiver. Luckily her mom had not found out about her little escapade. Her brown bikini fit great and her light make up made her look even better.
"Wooeeh" Jared laughed as she came up to the surface. Ally looked at him and he was watching the game thankfully the team he wanted to win was winning. Smiling she noticed that he had not seen her then swimming up to him she put her hands on his shoulders and quickly dunked him.
Sputtering when he came up he gave her a funny look. "Why did you do that" He asked laughing.
"Do what" she answered innocently? Then swimming into his arms she turned around to watch the Super Bowl. The Dallas Cowboys where up 60-25 against the Dolphins. Time seemed to flash by as they cheered on the Cowboys the final seconds didn’t need to be watched because the Cowboys had won 70-25.
"Yes" Ally cried as she and Jared whooped loudly and so did everyone else. When the game was over Ally and everyone else ran inside and got warm. Then checking her watch she gasped she had to get home to watch the Florida Derby. Jared must have noticed to because he grabbed her hand said a quick goodbye then they rushed to his truck. Speeding home in silence she rested her chin on his shoulder.
Then once they got home she and Jared jumped out of the car and sprinted inside. Melanie, Jazz, Ashleigh and Mike smiled at she threw open the door.
"Don’t worry it hasn’t started" Ashleigh laughed. Then calmly walking to the nearest chair she and Jared sat down in the "Love Chair". Her heart beated quicker and quicker until it came to a complete hault when she saw Top Prince being lead around by Tyler.
Dropping her coke she gasped when a girl walked up to him and kissed him it was Kristy her best friend she was kissing HER boyfriend.
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13) You gotta have more soon!! PLease!!!!!
Elegance...speed...stamina...
The power...the exhilaration...the grace...the excitment...
It all comes together to make up one great sport and one excellent horse...
Eventing
Dallas isn't good enough to be in the Super Bowl, and even if they did play, they wouldn't win. BUT, at least their betaing the Dolphins. I HATE the Dolphins. Especially since Ricky Williams is on the team.
GO SAINTS!!! yea, I know. I know a lot about sports. That's what I get when I'm Aiden's sister. =/
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
LOL! The Dolphins beat the Cowboys on Thanksgiving. Mwah!!!! But still... Rick Williams DOES suck, lol.
When will you have more????
Hey horsenut, try to save your pics and then upload them to your own server. And try to limit the amount of pics you use. It kind of slows down the board.
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
First things first
CAROLINA ALL THE WAY!! hehehe i love their mascot:-D and they're doing a lot better than they have....
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
Containing herself Ally settled down and put her head on Jared’s shoulder. Every body looked at her in surprise but she ignored them. Her stomach growled and her heart slowly began to beat. Deciding not to bash Kristy in front of Jared she told her self to wait till later, anyway she was going out with Jared.
Then she suddenly felt better when Frosty’s Empire trotted into view. The filly’s presence made everything seem to disappear. Her graceful movements seemed to make her float as if she was on air. The talented filly’s ears flicked back as Christina whispered instructions for the race. Just then both Top Prince and Frosty where in the same screen. Noting that Frosty had a little more muscle to her than Prince did. But both looked incredible.
"Well Jerry what do you think about this small but incredible field" Andrew Mires asked Jerry Baker? Both race broadcasters where ex-trainers and where incredibly handsome for 40 year old -lol dont ask -
"Well considering that the CO-favorites Frosty’s Empire and Top Prince their is absolutely no certain winner. If you think about it reasonably the filly has never raced against colts before but she has done very well and I think she will live up to her sire’s name but I think it will be against fillies" Jerry said almost bored.
"But she is unbeaten and she was bred to race this distance.. oh well listen to me I dont think I am making any sense but you kind of get my flow" Andrew chuckled. At his sentence Ally and Melanie burst into a fit of giggles.
"It’s ok Andrew I think I get it but anyway back to the point. I also think that Insight, Rhythmic Ransom, and Evil Eyes are also exceptional. I mean if you look at it this way Insight has never raced on this kind of track and has never raced on Dirt before so as third favorite I think he has met his match for this race, I seriously doubt he can adjust to the surface well" Jerry said critically.
Ally winced at his harsh tone and shivered when the camera was directed at Insight. The icy gray was like a harsh snowy wind he made your inside’s freeze up.
"True, very true other than Evil Eyes I dont think that Frosty’s Empire and Top Prince are going to have much challenge but let’s see how the race plays out" Andrew said slowly.
Flashing before her eyes the horses had been loaded into the gate and raced off. She carefully watched the thoroughbreds run their race. To her surprise Frosty was many lengths in front and was being rated.
"And it’s Frosty’s Empire with the huge lead. Maybe by almost ten lengths, and the speedy filly is being followed by the California Champ Top Prince then Insight making his first appearance in the states since his maiden. But wait it seems like Top Prince is making an early yet great move" The announcer cried excitedly.
"As they make it through the stretch Frosty’s Empire is holding onto her lead by six lengths but Evil Eyes and the surprise Insight had now passed Top Prince but Top Prince still has more to give as they pound up and so does the filly" He cried once again.
"Go baby Go" She shrieked. The filly looked like the sure winner until Top Prince gained up on her . Suddenly he was nose for nose with her as they hit the final furlong. Gripping onto Jared’s hand she squeezed as suddenly they flashed under the wire nose for nose stride for stride.
"What a race The West Cost Champion in a photo finish with the big filly with an even bigger heart" The announcer cried. Ally’s grip tightened when she saw the filly coming back into view then she gasped in horror the filly was limping. Frosty was hurt!
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It's good, bu I'm really sick of reading about how the horse is in the lead by over 10 lengths and ends up injured. Or even if they have a big lead. It just gets real boring.
Re: Ally Series #2 A light Above (PG-13)
"Easy Timer" Ally crooned as she pulled the thoroughbred gelding down to a walk. It had been one week since Frosty's injury and Ally had heard nothing about it. All she knew was that the filly was hurt and hurt badly.
"If it wasn't for Prince's little push that only i could see she would have won it" She had said win she saw Frosty posted second. Feeling the need to see horses she ran outside.
Timer Tim was Whitebrooks best gelding. He was a very exceptional sprinter and had just won his first graded one race at Keenland just a few weeks ago and now he was being readied for a small allowance race which would give Ashleigh a good idea if his win was a freak or a true win.
"Ok Timer you just finished your first breeze and you don't seem like it" She said patting his sweaty neck. It hadn't been his fastest breeze but it was exceptional. Timer was usually very loud and hyper after his breeze's but this time all he managed was a small nicker and a light toss of his head. Trotting over to Ashleigh she saw a bright smile on Ashleigh's face and one on all the people around her with the same huge smile.
Wondering what was going on she decided to jump off and hand him to Dani and walk over to Ashleigh. "What's going on" She asked?
"Well we found out that Frosty has a small tendon injury and thats all" Ashleigh said with bubbling excitement in her voice. Feeling the first smile that had settled on her face since before Frosty's race.
"Are you serious" She sputtered! Suddenly Ally felt laughter fill up inside of her and go away. "But, she's still hurt! This could keep her out of the Triple Crown" She cried. Then bursting into tears Ally felt Ashleigh's and her mothers arms wrap around her.
Her mother made a calming sound and whispered " No body ever said Frosty was going to the crown". Stepping back Ally glared at her mother.
"Are you serious, Frosty almost beat the best horse in the nation and she was hurt" She screamed. Then pulling away from both of them she took a deep breathe and got ready for another screaming. "And... And she has not got worse than second and this was her first lost, she shouldn't race in the Triple Tira she should race against the finest thoroughbred dirt racers in the world for peat sakes". Then saying that she turned away and sprinted to wards the training barn to get Whirlwind ready for Jareds breeze.
"Ouch" Ally yelped as Whirlwind nipped her bare arm, "Settle down Whirlwind" !
"Here let me help you" A voice from behind her said making her jump. Turning around she saw her soon to be step father. Smiling she gladly excepted the help and went along tacking him up.
"Can I ask you something" She asked quietly?
"Anything" Jazz answered.
"Well my mother has never told me anything about Perfect Image and I want to know where she is" Ally said frowning as she tightened the girth.
"Well Image is at Townsend Acre's with her second foal Melanie's Image" Jazz said blushing.
"Her second isn't she eighteen shouldn't she have more than two" She asked?
"Well she should but i didn't want to breed Image without her favorite person their with her, but then I had a feeling that sooner or later I would be with Melanie again and I bred Image to Star and she just had her second foal" Jazz said quickly. Then nodding Ally felt a plan come up.
"Are you going to bring her back here" She asked putting the bridle on.?
"Well I want to" He said happily.
"Then do it" She cried.
"But i also want Slight Mist, Image's first foal who was a many time graded one winner and won the Derby and Preakness and the Breeder's Cup mile and the Dubai World Cup, but i don't think Brad will let me" He said quietly.
"How about you call him and ask him because I know you can bring Image and Perfection over so negotiate with him about bringing Mist over" She said wickedly. With that Jazz agreed and pulled out his small cell phone.
"Ok Al is Whirlwind ready" Jared said. Nodding Ally handed him the small mare and awaited Jazz's outcome. Feeling nervous Ally felt herself start to pace and she did. Up and down the aisle till finally she saw Jazz's grim face.
"What" She asked when she got to him?
"Well he said he would but" Jazz started.
"But what, come on it cant be that bad" She said quickly.
"Well..he will but he wants something" Jazz said again.
"What does he want" Ally said feeling ready to burst.
"He want's custody of you" Jazz murmured. Feeling the blood rush out of her face she fell to the ground on her knees.
"What.." She asked making sure she had heard him right.
"He will give me Mist in return for half custody of you" Jazz said with fear in his voice. Ally felt tears burst from her eyes and her body tremble.
"Brad Townsed, The man who raped her mom wanted custody of her" Ally thought as she crawled into Jazz's arms for comfort.
You gotta have more soon!! PLease!!!!!
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